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My Example For Humpty Dumpty Contest

Many know the tale of humpty Dumpty But nobody knew that he was a dummy Who was he, why he sat on a wall and do you really believe that he did fall? Your whole life was a lie, coz humpty was a spy He was not a egg, but a really clever guy He was a serial killer who's plan was to kill the king He was so dangerous that in order to do this he could do anything Everyday dress as an egg he would climb the wall Making a plan to kill the king and waiting for his partner's call Little did he know was that secret service was also searching him through the hall They were aware of everything and waiting for a chance to kill him The special foce got a hint and they started to follow him Reaching his headquarters they found the plan good To dress up in a egg, with sniper in hand, Kill the king and ran as fast as he could That day everything was set, the sniper, the plan,the wreck As he aim for king, another bullet hit him, right through the head, It was bullet of special force, his so called plan was dissolved The king was saved and to his death he fell People didn't know anything but they saw a egg fall That day they made a lie, portray humpty as a egg So that people shouldn't have fear of death Everyone was told a lie , even the king except for the force Humpty was never a egg,nor a food but simply a spy An assassin trying to kill king while masquerading as an egg You have always been told a lie coz humpty was not a egg but spy
This is My example for the contest "the mystery of Humpty Dumpty " And of course I want you people to write a better poem

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Date: 7/6/2018 6:32:00 AM
Fantastic... what a creative and clever mind you possess! MARVELOUS!
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Date: 6/30/2018 4:25:00 PM
haha this is clever. I am interesting in seeing the other takes on the subject, you have made a real good challenge :)
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:56:00 PM
Funny n interesting. Nice imagery. I appreciate. Now to think again.
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Date: 6/27/2018 11:02:00 AM
I shall never think of Humpty Dumpty the same way again, lol. Great story and poem portraying Humpty as an assassin and spy. Love your imagination!
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Date: 6/26/2018 6:02:00 PM
NOt an egg but spy!! So clever, Faraz. I just saw an outstanding entry in your contest. Gosh, all the good ideas like yours and that other one have been done for us already!!
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Date: 6/26/2018 3:46:00 PM
you will win your own challenge, faraz.. i'm not half of what this poem speaks of... a grand piece!..huggs
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Date: 6/26/2018 8:37:00 AM
This will be a tough one to match. A great example.
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Date: 6/26/2018 7:53:00 AM
Great poem and nothing like I was going to write for the contest, I was going to write about how I was fragile like an egg, like humpty dumpty and when I fell I could not be put back together. Anyways, best put on my mystery hat and get cracking ~
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Date: 6/25/2018 11:23:00 PM
An interesting version of the popular Humpty Dumpty poem Faraz, I can see that you have a very imaginative mind....Maria Ps,,Check your soupmail
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Date: 6/25/2018 8:21:00 PM
I love your take of Humpty Dumpty, Faraz.. :)
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