My Example For Humpty Dumpty Contest

Many know the tale of humpty Dumpty But nobody knew that he was a dummy Who was he, why he sat on a wall and do you really believe that he did fall? Your whole life was a lie, coz humpty was a spy He was not an egg, but a very clever guy He was a serial killer who's plan was to kill the king And to achieve this goal, he could do anything Everyday dressed as an egg, he would climb the wall Making a plan to kill the king and waiting for his partner's call Little did he know was that secret service was also searching him through the hall They were aware of everything and waiting for a chance to kill him The special force got a hint and they started to follow him Reaching his headquarters they found the plan good To dress up in an egg, with sniper in hand, Kill the king and ran as fast as he could That day everything was set, the sniper, the plan,the wreck As he aimed for the king, another bullet hit him, right through the head, It was bullet of special force, his so called plan was dissolved People didn't know anything but they saw an egg fall That day they made a lie, portray humpty as an egg So that people shouldn't have fear of death Everyone was told a lie, even the king except for the force Humpty was never an egg,nor a food but simply a spy An assassin trying to kill king while masquerading as an egg You have always been told a lie coz humpty was not a egg but spy
This is My example for the contest "the mystery of Humpty Dumpty " And of course I want you people to write a better poem
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Ellison Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Fantastic... what a creative and clever mind you possess! MARVELOUS!
Nance Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 4:25 PM
haha this is clever. I am interesting in seeing the other takes on the subject, you have made a real good challenge :)
Dutta Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:56 PM
Funny n interesting. Nice imagery. I appreciate. Now to think again.
Macfarlane Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 11:02 AM
I shall never think of Humpty Dumpty the same way again, lol. Great story and poem portraying Humpty as an assassin and spy. Love your imagination!
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:02 PM
NOt an egg but spy!! So clever, Faraz. I just saw an outstanding entry in your contest. Gosh, all the good ideas like yours and that other one have been done for us already!!
Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 3:46 PM
you will win your own challenge, faraz.. i'm not half of what this poem speaks of... a grand piece!..huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:37 AM
This will be a tough one to match. A great example.
La France Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Great poem and nothing like I was going to write for the contest, I was going to write about how I was fragile like an egg, like humpty dumpty and when I fell I could not be put back together. Anyways, best put on my mystery hat and get cracking ~
Williams Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 11:23 PM
An interesting version of the popular Humpty Dumpty poem Faraz, I can see that you have a very imaginative mind....Maria Ps,,Check your soupmail
Roper Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:21 PM
I love your take of Humpty Dumpty, Faraz.. :)
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