My Evil Demon

There's an evil demon lurking
On the edges of my soul
I try my best to push him off
He's stubborn, very bold 

He tries to sway my thinking
And how I look at things
I tell him, “Take a hike!
Get lost, you ding-a-ling!”

He never seems to listen
He insists on causing trouble
Says it's his only role in life
I'm about to burst his bubble

Demons don't tell me what to do
Don't need these guys to coach
My standards are extremely high
My actions beyond reproach

There's an evil demon lurking
On the edges of my soul
But this here dude's not worried
I'm the guy who's in control!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Breidenthal Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:41 AM
I skipped up a little from reading on your list to take a look at this one, and of course, was not disappointed at the least. Another awesome poem!! I find it really cute, but it also speaks of your strong and vital character. It takes great great courage and strength to conquer demons that seek control over our lives. "But this here dude's not worried I'm the guy who's in control!" Of course you're not worried! You're the man! Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 8:38 AM
You are much too kind my dearest Laura!!! Don't know how I survived on the site without your loving words and upbeat appraisals!!! So happy we have connected dearest lady... tight squeezie hugs, Jake xxxxxx
Wright Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 8:35 AM
rhythm...sorry.
Ellison Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Ha ha... didn't even notice! LOL
Wright Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 8:34 AM
Nice Rhtym and flow. A vivid story.
Ellison Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 10:32 AM
Hey Willie... thanks! Your encouraging words are appreciated! Jack
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