My Eve

For I know what Adam went through
From God, to me...Father, thank You
First time he looked at Eve 
In Eden
Rubbed his God given, overwhelmed eyes
Saw her feet, legs, walking in bareness, her thighs 
Ravishing, her standing there, he couldn't believe
And God gave him exactly and all that he would need
An Impeccable Queen
In the middle of the very first dream
Woken from a deep sleep
Missing a rib now, but she's here,
Behold God's most paralyzing earthly creature! 
Ran his fingers through her hair
Belly button & lips 
Shoulders & breasts, 
What delicious features
The very first team, very first pair
How Yahweh, all along, intended it to be....no fig leaves
No eating from the forbidden tree
Here Eve, kneel down with me
Let's pray together and obey 
Blessed to have one another 
From the first time Adam held her hand
Is she real Father? He must of asked....
Of course....yes my son...she's all yours.......
Let me see, how she reacts.....
His perfect opposite
Kissed her face, shivering at first
Then calm, natural and relaxed.
Two beings, two rings, one flesh
Here's a rose for you wife Eve
Dinner's ready husband Adam, let's eat.
Two become one, up before the sun
Down with the moon, procreating 
Seven times a week, intense 
In the beginning.......it did not add up 
But now...................it all makes wonderful sense.
God willed us, from above
And so it was

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/17/2016 9:08:00 AM
Well done Gregory, this is a good read - DC
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/17/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you....
Date: 8/11/2016 7:02:00 PM
Well expressed, Gregory... your thoughts are epic.... Linda
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/11/2016 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Linda
Date: 8/11/2016 6:00:00 PM
Gregory, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/11/2016 6:18:00 PM
I accept. Thank you Skat
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