Vladislav Raven Poet Senryu

My Eternal Valentine - Valentine's Collection

(Valentine's Collection)

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My Valentine
I find you within my heart
A beloved rose

My heart is becalmed
Your love the ship I do sail
ripples of desire

My soul is aflame
You light my fires of passion
love shines in my night

My love is flowing
It runs into your ocean
Our hearts sing sublime

My Valentine
I find you within my heart
A beloved rose

18/01/2019.

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Connie Marcum Wong January 24, 2019 at 9:28 PM These senryu are gorgeous Mike. I loved all of them. I love that you used the first stanza to end your poem as well! Bravo! xxoo : ) Vladislav Raven January 28, 2019 at 8:23 AM Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always find these smaller forms harder to do. The collection still continues. The heart still has many songs to sing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Nette Onclaud January 18, 2019 at 3:38 PM ohh , i sigh and smile at your lovely dedication, vlad... a dreamy work from the heart!...huggs Vladislav Raven January 18, 2019 at 5:03 PM Hi Nette, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. A song that sings from the heart. I am glad you felt happy for reading. This collection is for everyone. I am enjoying doing these writes. The heart is still singing and the collection goes on. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire January 18, 2019 at 11:59 AM How wonderful it would be to receive a Valentine card with verses such as these! Enduring love is conveyed beautifully, Vladislav. Hugs, Carolyn Vladislav Raven January 18, 2019 at 3:28 PM Hi Carolyn, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece. It is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The collection continues. The rose still sings and the heart still speaks. The journey does continue through the collection. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vladislav Raven January 18, 2019 at 11:34 AM I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands January 18, 2019 at 11:11 AM I believe you are meant to be writing these beautiful poems! A favorite :) Vladislav Raven January 18, 2019 at 11:38 AM Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this write, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked piece. Maybe you are right Heidi. I just decided it was time to write a Valentine's collection. I am enjoying doing so. I am still not finished with the Sonnet form yet. I still have two different forms to go. Still letting the heart sing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX