My Eternal Commitment

A full head of hair doesn’t compare to a bald head
A bald head doesn’t compare to massive bare breasts
And massive bulbous breasts don’t even come close 
In comparison to your nicely rounded bottom

Yes, I love derrières 
But only my Lover’s
She has a great looking fanny full of grace and class
And easy to fall asleep on like on a willowy cloud

Happiness lies in the comfort of the bottom
Rocking back and forth
I stare at her eyes in the mirror looking at the mystery she exudes
Where I see many ghosts

Showing themselves among many stories and memories 
Ephemeral promises made and received 
cherished but vanished like smoke in a hurricane
Or mowed grass blowing away with the wind 

Your body intoxicated me 
Your smile led me to my fantasies 
That long ago enraptured me 
And like a famished young lover 
I was captivated by the feast you offered 

Each day we have loved each other with passion
Holding each other’s bodies tight
Nourishing Love to sustain it for another day
Confirming our Love has withstood the test of time   

A testament to promises of forever made at our wedding  
Extending to a devotion of fifty-eight years of marriage 
Knowing that when one eventually leaves this earthly plane
Memories will spring to life and console our hearts

One will leave on that journey to that place of hopeful peace
While the other contemplates life without regrets
Later to embark on a final journey where our souls will reunite 
And our story will resume as we pledged each other...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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