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My Essence Sings

Got me feeling dizzy from your touch Lightheaded as your kisses make me sway My temperature rising oh so much When your around I'm led astray Heart beating faster burning my chest My breathing becomes hard to catch Left in a certain kind of sweet unrest Emotions left to collide feelings none match Still I crave this sickness that you bring Don't need no diagnosis I know what I got How you make my essence sing You give a love that's so very hot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/6/2020 12:36:00 PM
Brenda, magical and enchanting, with a hint of sensual, lovely writing, well done _Constance
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/6/2020 2:36:00 PM
Dear heart thank you so much I really appreciate your visit!;)
Date: 1/5/2020 4:20:00 AM
A good romantic poem. Liked the theme and its flow. God bless you.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2020 4:55:00 AM
Thank you!;)
Date: 1/4/2020 10:42:00 PM
So, all of us readers are holding our breath for you to reveal the identity of the 'you' in this hot poem... ~ Come on, Brenda: My asthma's kicking in... Choke...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2020 12:17:00 AM
Lmao! Gershon you are so silly! Lmao! Wow you are quite the jokester! Hahaha! Thank you for the visit my friend!;)
Date: 1/4/2020 2:02:00 PM
- A beautiful, soft and romantic poem Brenda ... I enjoy this tonight :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2020 3:09:00 PM
Anne-Lise May your new year be amazing my friend!;)
Date: 1/4/2020 11:20:00 AM
Such a great piece filled with romance and ecstasy enough to fills one's heart full to overflowing! So stirring completely, magical you are so!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2020 11:29:00 AM
Haha thank you so much gordon! I really appreciate your read and comment!;)

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