Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

My Essence Sings

Got me feeling dizzy 
from your touch
Lightheaded as your
kisses make me sway
My temperature rising 
oh so much
When your around 
I'm led astray

Heart beating faster 
burning my chest
My breathing becomes
hard to catch
Left in a certain kind 
of sweet unrest
Emotions left to collide 
feelings none match

Still I crave this sickness 
that you bring
Don't need no diagnosis 
I know what I got
How you make my 
essence sing
You give a love that's
so very hot

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Constance La France January 6, 2020 at 12:36 PM Brenda, magical and enchanting, with a hint of sensual, lovely writing, well done _Constance Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 2:36 PM Dear heart thank you so much I really appreciate your visit!;)

Pratap Roy January 5, 2020 at 4:20 AM A good romantic poem. Liked the theme and its flow. God bless you. Brenda Chiri January 5, 2020 at 4:55 AM Thank you!;)

Gershon Wolf January 4, 2020 at 10:42 PM So, all of us readers are holding our breath for you to reveal the identity of the 'you' in this hot poem... ~ Come on, Brenda: My asthma's kicking in... Choke... Brenda Chiri January 5, 2020 at 12:17 AM Lmao! Gershon you are so silly! Lmao! Wow you are quite the jokester! Hahaha! Thank you for the visit my friend!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2020 at 2:02 PM - A beautiful, soft and romantic poem Brenda ... I enjoy this tonight :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Chiri January 4, 2020 at 3:09 PM Anne-Lise May your new year be amazing my friend!;)

Gordon Mcconnell January 4, 2020 at 11:20 AM Such a great piece filled with romance and ecstasy enough to fills one's heart full to overflowing! So stirring completely, magical you are so! Brenda Chiri January 4, 2020 at 11:29 AM Haha thank you so much gordon! I really appreciate your read and comment!;)