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My Energy Has Flown

Much as I'd like to do what I used to At 78, my energy has flown It's really not matter of choice at all The body decides on it's own Oh how I wish I still had the energy As I did just ten years ago Age has a way of deciding for us How far our body can go Must always try to really stay active Retirement years can be long Mental abilities stay almost the same Physically it's a different song Physical exercise is very important To maintain our youthful zest Otherwise the body starts to shut down And memories are all we have left © Jack Ellison 2013
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Date: 11/25/2013 7:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem, and ageless. I can relate to this being a new mom. :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/25/2013 7:47:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words my friend! Warm hugs new Mom! xox
Date: 11/24/2013 9:50:00 AM
One of your most touching poems, of all time... Mike understands completely... He said to tell you: he used to jump over the fence with one hand... Now he opens the gate... Not to mention that he needs to finish more and more of my sentences for me... But I find writting words easier than talking... So here I am... Love you all... PS. This is St. Louis... so would you PLEASE call your canadian clipper back... REALLY! Honest! ... LOL
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Date: 11/24/2013 11:09:00 AM
"Not to mention that he needs to finish more and more of my sentences for me" LOL I don't I've completed a sentence on my own for ten years or more!!! So sorry about the Canadian Clippers! Love xoxoxox
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