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My Enemy the Sun

I’m a pacifist to the morning sun 
even though it pushes my limits. 
A warring battle between us 
since I was young. 

The constant struggle for 
supremacy; a never ending affair. 
My allies bed, comforter and pillow 
are the best soldiers always ready.
These warriors are true fighters 
till the end. 

My protectors against our foe’s 
piercing light;they are outmatched 
no matter their strength.

Forever my fated enemy till the rest of my days. 
I promise you, sun! You cowardly swine! We’ll win against your rays!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/13/2015 2:05:00 PM
Very nice. Interesting. I enjoyed your satire piece. Best wishes to you dear.
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