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My Enemy the Sun

I’m a pacifist to the morning sun even though it pushes my limits. A warring battle between us since I was young. The constant struggle for supremacy; a never ending affair. My allies bed, comforter and pillow are the best soldiers always ready. These warriors are true fighters till the end. My protectors against our foe’s piercing light;they are outmatched no matter their strength. Forever my fated enemy till the rest of my days. I promise you, sun! You cowardly swine! We’ll win against your rays!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/13/2015 2:05:00 PM
Very nice. Interesting. I enjoyed your satire piece. Best wishes to you dear.
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