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My Endless Love

In the garden of my youth, I sprouted first among four others. each a bud that bloomed with me, distinctive, yet nourished with our mother's blood. No longer side by side, we stay friends because my sisters grew into my endless love. For Linda's Friendship Contest

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Date: 6/18/2014 10:20:00 PM
Andrea This is so sweet, caring and loving. Your heart exploded with all the devotion you have for your sisters. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Red Riding Hood poem.
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Date: 6/10/2013 6:46:00 AM
great job with a difficult form, congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 6/9/2013 5:49:00 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea.....love the flower analogy
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Date: 6/9/2013 11:29:00 AM
Good after noon ANDREA ;-) Congratulations with your wonderful poem of friendship. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 10/7/2012 5:24:00 AM
nicely done and put togather
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Date: 9/28/2012 2:06:00 PM
This is so sweet and shows how much you love your sister's. Nicely done Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 9/24/2012 4:48:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, from a beautiful person judging by your excellent poem. Thank you so much for leaving a comment on my poem, I couldn't find a way of replying to you. Warm best wishes. Pete.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2012 9:21:00 PM
but you just did. right here!!!
Date: 9/23/2012 6:20:00 AM
It's love of love. Nicely worded by adding endless. Thanks for all the previous comments on my writes. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/22/2012 2:23:00 PM
very nice. so nice that you are that close to your sisters. warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:49:00 PM
This is so nice. I myself had four sisters. One is gone now. The rest of us keep in touch. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:38:00 PM
awww, what a sweet write - I love the clever vase shape
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:37:00 PM
LOve the form and every word that followed... so nice and a sure winner...luv n hugs Michael
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Date: 9/22/2012 7:41:00 AM
I looks like a vase,Andrea. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/22/2012 12:55:00 AM
What a beautiful way to honor your siblings Andrea. An excellent tribute poem they will all enjoy. (I found out how to delete the remark). Mahalo
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Date: 9/21/2012 10:07:00 PM
I'm not jealous of many things Andrea, but I would love to have this type of friendship with my Brother - I like how you emphasize the spirit inherent in blood - I like your heart - J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:47:00 AM
Very nice poem- but isn't it a shape poem? Peace &Love Matthew Anish
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/21/2012 8:32:00 PM
no, it's just a centered etheree, but I was pleased that it ended up looking like a flower or something!
Date: 9/21/2012 5:25:00 AM
oh, this is another beautiful one! so lovely etheree you've penned my dear friend. how i wish i have sister too! this is a winner for me. Good luck always!!! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/21/2012 4:26:00 AM
beautiful etheree Andrea....best wishes....love...Joseph
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Date: 9/21/2012 4:16:00 AM
Seeing this at the top of the winner list Andrea. Love reading your poems always. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:44:00 PM
Andrea, this is beautiful! I must say that I'm a little jealous. I wish I had a sister. My brother and I have nothing in common. We were close at one time, but he has become bitter and mean. I still love him too pieces even though we barely speak. Best wishes in the contest. I see you in first place! Soupmail coming...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/20/2012 8:50:00 PM
superb write again my friend Andrea. Enjoy reading it. Your love to your sisters are endless indeed. Advance Congratulations for the Contest.
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Date: 9/20/2012 4:15:00 PM
oh pretty sweet emotions for sisterly love Andrea .. family is the foundation and u created a brilliant beauty with this one luv .. good luck .. and yes I did have a dream as I described but it was bAED ON THE MOVIE bELL bOOK AND cANDLE .. A SUPER OLDIE ON tcm ..
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Date: 9/20/2012 3:27:00 PM
Winner for sure..It is so good to read your work that speaks of your love and relationship with your sisters..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/20/2012 3:08:00 PM
Family forevermore. May it never go out through the door. Time and space can take it's toll. Only loving hearts can save the family soul.
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Date: 9/20/2012 3:03:00 PM
Your special diamonds - take good care of them. Lovely written Andrea. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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