My Endless Love

In the garden of my youth, I sprouted first among four others. each a bud that bloomed with me, distinctive, yet nourished with our mother's blood. No longer side by side, we stay friends because my sisters grew into my endless love. For Linda's Friendship Contest
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Davis Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 10:20 PM
Andrea This is so sweet, caring and loving. Your heart exploded with all the devotion you have for your sisters. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Red Riding Hood poem.
Roberts Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 6:46 AM
great job with a difficult form, congrats on your win Andrea
May Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 5:49 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea.....love the flower analogy
A   Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 11:29 AM
Good after noon ANDREA ;-) Congratulations with your wonderful poem of friendship. always & forever *LINDA
Neshat Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 5:24 AM
nicely done and put togather
Babcock Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 2:06 PM
This is so sweet and shows how much you love your sister's. Nicely done Andrea. love phyl
Dome Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 4:48 AM
What a beautiful poem, from a beautiful person judging by your excellent poem. Thank you so much for leaving a comment on my poem, I couldn't find a way of replying to you. Warm best wishes. Pete.
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:21 PM
but you just did. right here!!!
Devnath  Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 6:20 AM
It's love of love. Nicely worded by adding endless. Thanks for all the previous comments on my writes. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl
Mason Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 2:23 PM
very nice. so nice that you are that close to your sisters. warm thoughts, Ralph
Carrillo Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 1:49 PM
This is so nice. I myself had four sisters. One is gone now. The rest of us keep in touch. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Horne Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 1:38 PM
awww, what a sweet write - I love the clever vase shape
Falotico Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 1:37 PM
LOve the form and every word that followed... so nice and a sure winner...luv n hugs Michael
Anish Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 7:41 AM
I looks like a vase,Andrea. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 12:55 AM
What a beautiful way to honor your siblings Andrea. An excellent tribute poem they will all enjoy. (I found out how to delete the remark). Mahalo
Bordner Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 10:07 PM
I'm not jealous of many things Andrea, but I would love to have this type of friendship with my Brother - I like how you emphasize the spirit inherent in blood - I like your heart - J.A.B. %
Anish Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 11:47 AM
Very nice poem- but isn't it a shape poem? Peace &Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 8:32 PM
no, it's just a centered etheree, but I was pleased that it ended up looking like a flower or something!
Gasun Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 5:25 AM
oh, this is another beautiful one! so lovely etheree you've penned my dear friend. how i wish i have sister too! this is a winner for me. Good luck always!!! love/hugs, Leonora
May Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 4:26 AM
beautiful etheree Andrea....best wishes....love...Joseph
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 4:16 AM
Seeing this at the top of the winner list Andrea. Love reading your poems always. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2012 at 9:44 PM
Andrea, this is beautiful! I must say that I'm a little jealous. I wish I had a sister. My brother and I have nothing in common. We were close at one time, but he has become bitter and mean. I still love him too pieces even though we barely speak. Best wishes in the contest. I see you in first place! Soupmail coming...hugs, Rhonda
Liwayway Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 8:50 PM
superb write again my friend Andrea. Enjoy reading it. Your love to your sisters are endless indeed. Advance Congratulations for the Contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 4:15 PM
oh pretty sweet emotions for sisterly love Andrea .. family is the foundation and u created a brilliant beauty with this one luv .. good luck .. and yes I did have a dream as I described but it was bAED ON THE MOVIE bELL bOOK AND cANDLE .. A SUPER OLDIE ON tcm ..
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 3:27 PM
Winner for sure..It is so good to read your work that speaks of your love and relationship with your sisters..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Johnson Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 3:08 PM
Family forevermore. May it never go out through the door. Time and space can take it's toll. Only loving hearts can save the family soul.
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Your special diamonds - take good care of them. Lovely written Andrea. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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