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My Endless Love

In the garden of my youth, I sprouted first among four others. each a bud that bloomed with me, distinctive, yet nourished with our mother's blood. No longer side by side, we stay friends because my sisters grew into my endless love. For Linda's Friendship Contest

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Robin Davis

Date: 6/18/2014 10:20:00 PM

Andrea This is so sweet, caring and loving. Your heart exploded with all the devotion you have for your sisters. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Red Riding Hood poem.

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/10/2013 6:46:00 AM

great job with a difficult form, congrats on your win Andrea

Joseph May

Date: 6/9/2013 5:49:00 PM

congrats on a great win Andrea.....love the flower analogy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 11:29:00 AM

Good after noon ANDREA ;-) Congratulations with your wonderful poem of friendship. always & forever *LINDA

Shirin Neshat

Date: 10/7/2012 5:24:00 AM

nicely done and put togather

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/28/2012 2:06:00 PM

This is so sweet and shows how much you love your sister's. Nicely done Andrea. love phyl

Peter Dome

Date: 9/24/2012 4:48:00 AM

What a beautiful poem, from a beautiful person judging by your excellent poem. Thank you so much for leaving a comment on my poem, I couldn't find a way of replying to you. Warm best wishes. Pete.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2012 9:21:00 PM

but you just did. right here!!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/23/2012 6:20:00 AM

It's love of love. Nicely worded by adding endless. Thanks for all the previous comments on my writes. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

Ralph Mason

Date: 9/22/2012 2:23:00 PM

very nice. so nice that you are that close to your sisters. warm thoughts, Ralph

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/22/2012 1:49:00 PM

This is so nice. I myself had four sisters. One is gone now. The rest of us keep in touch. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2012 1:38:00 PM

awww, what a sweet write - I love the clever vase shape

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/22/2012 1:37:00 PM

LOve the form and every word that followed... so nice and a sure winner...luv n hugs Michael

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/22/2012 7:41:00 AM

I looks like a vase,Andrea. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/22/2012 12:55:00 AM

What a beautiful way to honor your siblings Andrea. An excellent tribute poem they will all enjoy. (I found out how to delete the remark). Mahalo

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/21/2012 10:07:00 PM

I'm not jealous of many things Andrea, but I would love to have this type of friendship with my Brother - I like how you emphasize the spirit inherent in blood - I like your heart - J.A.B. %

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/21/2012 11:47:00 AM

Very nice poem- but isn't it a shape poem? Peace &Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/21/2012 8:32:00 PM

no, it's just a centered etheree, but I was pleased that it ended up looking like a flower or something!

Len Gasun

Date: 9/21/2012 5:25:00 AM

oh, this is another beautiful one! so lovely etheree you've penned my dear friend. how i wish i have sister too! this is a winner for me. Good luck always!!! love/hugs, Leonora

Joseph May

Date: 9/21/2012 4:26:00 AM

beautiful etheree Andrea....best wishes....love...Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2012 4:16:00 AM

Seeing this at the top of the winner list Andrea. Love reading your poems always. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/20/2012 9:44:00 PM

Andrea, this is beautiful! I must say that I'm a little jealous. I wish I had a sister. My brother and I have nothing in common. We were close at one time, but he has become bitter and mean. I still love him too pieces even though we barely speak. Best wishes in the contest. I see you in first place! Soupmail coming...hugs, Rhonda

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/20/2012 8:50:00 PM

superb write again my friend Andrea. Enjoy reading it. Your love to your sisters are endless indeed. Advance Congratulations for the Contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2012 4:15:00 PM

oh pretty sweet emotions for sisterly love Andrea .. family is the foundation and u created a brilliant beauty with this one luv .. good luck .. and yes I did have a dream as I described but it was bAED ON THE MOVIE bELL bOOK AND cANDLE .. A SUPER OLDIE ON tcm ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2012 3:27:00 PM

Winner for sure..It is so good to read your work that speaks of your love and relationship with your sisters..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Robert Johnson

Date: 9/20/2012 3:08:00 PM

Family forevermore. May it never go out through the door. Time and space can take it's toll. Only loving hearts can save the family soul.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2012 3:03:00 PM

Your special diamonds - take good care of them. Lovely written Andrea. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)