Alkas Poetry Poet Lyric

My Enchanted Lady

Why are you enchanted
                gentle lady?
                My mind
                every day gets worse,
                It's my rambling heart
                is not here anymore ...
                No longer poetize
                as before ...
                That one who
                preceded you stole it
                and now ?
                Now only rime
                memoirs...
               Don't be enchanted
               sweet lady...
               The verses I write
               they are not for you ...
               They are for her ...!

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Susan Ashley July 28, 2019 at 9:16 PM An amazing poem, Alkas. An impactful emotional piece. I am enchanted by your artistry. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Alkas Poetry August 13, 2019 at 12:22 AM Even late, thank you for your comment dear poet Susan ! salute alkas

Jennifer Proxenos July 27, 2019 at 12:51 PM Great poem, great poet. Congratulations Alkas for receiving the honour of POTD. Hugs Jennifer. Alkas Poetry August 13, 2019 at 12:23 AM Thank you dear Jennifer, even late...I am glad for your comment... salute alkas

Kim Rodrigues July 25, 2019 at 6:12 AM Congratulations on POTD! ...they are for her

Brandy Nicole July 24, 2019 at 10:14 PM Your heart writes of love, and for the one it is meant for. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations ALKAS, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Alkas Poetry July 25, 2019 at 12:02 AM i feel enchanted with your comment dear Brandy...Sweet words you wrote, thank you, kisses and hugs, salute alkas

Kurt Ravidas July 24, 2019 at 5:03 PM Winged Warrior is ahead of me, meaning enchanting) Perfect POTD. Congrats, Alkas. Alkas Poetry July 25, 2019 at 12:03 AM Kurt important here is that you came to my rescue and commented...Thank you my dear Comrade... salute alkas

Winged Warrior July 24, 2019 at 9:03 AM A very enchanting! verse...Congrats!! on POTD!! Alkas...happy enchantments...^WW^ :o) Alkas Poetry July 24, 2019 at 12:36 PM Thank you, dear Winged Warrior... salute alkas

Arturo Michael July 24, 2019 at 8:18 AM Nice, really Nice...Congratulations ALKAS...Love the concept and delivery... Alkas Poetry July 24, 2019 at 12:40 PM Nice comment my dear friend Arturo, thank you very much... salute alkas

Tom Cunningham July 24, 2019 at 8:03 AM Nice to.see you getting the POTD honour Alkas, congratulations. Tom Alkas Poetry July 24, 2019 at 12:46 PM Thank you dear Tom, very appreciated comment, salute alkas

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 24, 2019 at 7:49 AM This love song is not for you, almost heartbreaking! Very cool write Alkas. Congratulations on POTD! xomo Alkas Poetry July 24, 2019 at 12:47 PM Many thanks Maureen, very cool comment, salute alkas

Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2019 at 6:27 AM - ... she's lucky :) ... congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Alkas Poetry July 24, 2019 at 12:49 PM Hi Anne-Lise, i am happy for your comment, xxxooo salute alkas

Demetrios Trifiatis July 24, 2019 at 4:52 AM Congratulations my friend! A deserved honor! Alkas Poetry July 24, 2019 at 12:50 PM Thank you brother friend Demetrios for you kind comment, salute alkas

Jeff Connelly July 23, 2019 at 11:07 PM OUCH Alkas. Moving on to a different muse. A rough transition but a well written poem. As for me, I will stay with mi Musa; she always inspires me. I feel much love for her. Thanks Alkas. Alkas Poetry July 24, 2019 at 1:06 PM Nyeri kind commenting on my poetry, i thank very much for your words...you are a good friend of mine... salute alkas