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My Enchanted Lady

Why are you enchanted gentle lady? My mind every day gets worse, It's my rambling heart is not here anymore ... No longer poetize as before ... That one who preceded you stole it and now ? Now only rime memoirs... Don't be enchanted sweet lady... The verses I write they are not for you ... They are for her ...!

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/28/2019 9:16:00 PM

An amazing poem, Alkas. An impactful emotional piece. I am enchanted by your artistry. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Alkas Poetry
Date: 8/13/2019 12:22:00 AM

Even late, thank you for your comment dear poet Susan ! salute alkas

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/27/2019 12:51:00 PM

Great poem, great poet. Congratulations Alkas for receiving the honour of POTD. Hugs Jennifer.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 8/13/2019 12:23:00 AM

Thank you dear Jennifer, even late...I am glad for your comment... salute alkas

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/25/2019 6:12:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD! ...they are for her

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/24/2019 10:14:00 PM

Your heart writes of love, and for the one it is meant for. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations ALKAS, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/25/2019 12:02:00 AM

i feel enchanted with your comment dear Brandy...Sweet words you wrote, thank you, kisses and hugs, salute alkas

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/24/2019 5:03:00 PM

Winged Warrior is ahead of me, meaning enchanting) Perfect POTD. Congrats, Alkas.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/25/2019 12:03:00 AM

Kurt important here is that you came to my rescue and commented...Thank you my dear Comrade... salute alkas

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/24/2019 9:03:00 AM

A very enchanting! verse...Congrats!! on POTD!! Alkas...happy enchantments...^WW^ :o)

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/24/2019 12:36:00 PM

Thank you, dear Winged Warrior... salute alkas

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/24/2019 8:18:00 AM

Nice, really Nice...Congratulations ALKAS...Love the concept and delivery...

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/24/2019 12:40:00 PM

Nice comment my dear friend Arturo, thank you very much... salute alkas

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/24/2019 8:03:00 AM

Nice to.see you getting the POTD honour Alkas, congratulations. Tom

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/24/2019 12:46:00 PM

Thank you dear Tom, very appreciated comment, salute alkas

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/24/2019 7:49:00 AM

This love song is not for you, almost heartbreaking! Very cool write Alkas. Congratulations on POTD! xomo

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/24/2019 12:47:00 PM

Many thanks Maureen, very cool comment, salute alkas

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2019 6:27:00 AM

- ... she's lucky :) ... congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/24/2019 12:49:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, i am happy for your comment, xxxooo salute alkas

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/24/2019 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations my friend! A deserved honor!

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/24/2019 12:50:00 PM

Thank you brother friend Demetrios for you kind comment, salute alkas

Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/23/2019 11:07:00 PM

OUCH Alkas. Moving on to a different muse. A rough transition but a well written poem. As for me, I will stay with mi Musa; she always inspires me. I feel much love for her. Thanks Alkas.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/24/2019 1:06:00 PM

Nyeri kind commenting on my poetry, i thank very much for your words...you are a good friend of mine... salute alkas