My Enchanted Lady

Why are you enchanted
                gentle lady?
                My mind
                every day gets worse,
                It's my rambling heart
                is not here anymore ...
                No longer poetize
                as before ...
                That one who
                preceded you stole it
                and now ?
                Now only rime
                memoirs...
               Don't be enchanted
               sweet lady...
               The verses I write
               they are not for you ...
               They are for her ...!

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Date: 7/28/2019 9:16:00 PM
An amazing poem, Alkas. An impactful emotional piece. I am enchanted by your artistry. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/13/2019 12:22:00 AM
Even late, thank you for your comment dear poet Susan ! salute alkas
Date: 7/27/2019 12:51:00 PM
Great poem, great poet. Congratulations Alkas for receiving the honour of POTD. Hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 8/13/2019 12:23:00 AM
Thank you dear Jennifer, even late...I am glad for your comment... salute alkas
Date: 7/25/2019 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! ...they are for her
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Date: 7/24/2019 10:14:00 PM
Your heart writes of love, and for the one it is meant for. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations ALKAS, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/25/2019 12:02:00 AM
i feel enchanted with your comment dear Brandy...Sweet words you wrote, thank you, kisses and hugs, salute alkas
Date: 7/24/2019 5:03:00 PM
Winged Warrior is ahead of me, meaning enchanting) Perfect POTD. Congrats, Alkas.
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Date: 7/25/2019 12:03:00 AM
Kurt important here is that you came to my rescue and commented...Thank you my dear Comrade... salute alkas
Date: 7/24/2019 9:03:00 AM
A very enchanting! verse...Congrats!! on POTD!! Alkas...happy enchantments...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/24/2019 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, dear Winged Warrior... salute alkas
Date: 7/24/2019 8:18:00 AM
Nice, really Nice...Congratulations ALKAS...Love the concept and delivery...
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Date: 7/24/2019 12:40:00 PM
Nice comment my dear friend Arturo, thank you very much... salute alkas
Date: 7/24/2019 8:03:00 AM
Nice to.see you getting the POTD honour Alkas, congratulations. Tom
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Date: 7/24/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thank you dear Tom, very appreciated comment, salute alkas
Date: 7/24/2019 7:49:00 AM
This love song is not for you, almost heartbreaking! Very cool write Alkas. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Date: 7/24/2019 12:47:00 PM
Many thanks Maureen, very cool comment, salute alkas
Date: 7/24/2019 6:27:00 AM
- ... she's lucky :) ... congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/24/2019 12:49:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, i am happy for your comment, xxxooo salute alkas
Date: 7/24/2019 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations my friend! A deserved honor!
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Date: 7/24/2019 12:50:00 PM
Thank you brother friend Demetrios for you kind comment, salute alkas
Date: 7/23/2019 11:07:00 PM
OUCH Alkas. Moving on to a different muse. A rough transition but a well written poem. As for me, I will stay with mi Musa; she always inspires me. I feel much love for her. Thanks Alkas.
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Date: 7/24/2019 1:06:00 PM
Nyeri kind commenting on my poetry, i thank very much for your words...you are a good friend of mine... salute alkas
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