My Empty Shoes

Shoes going nowhere...
Ashes used to fertilize
Blood thirsty hunger

T 'was time for shower
Water turned to gas and smoke
Shoes going nowhere...

for Abe's contest:" Leather Voices"  (AUSHWITZ)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 12:56 PM
I think you did a geat job with this little gem, Iolanda. Best of luck in the contest. I am sure hoping to get to all my comments today. It's good to get back into the "groove" of things, but it takes work!! Luv, andrea
Flach Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 9:00 PM
This contest really is a parodox - lovely words for a terrible event. Yet words set to prose sometimes help to heal historical wounds. You did a GREAT job on this. Regardless how it fairs in the contest, this is well done. Joe
Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 8:46 PM
Good luck in the contest
A   Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 7:31 PM
nice write, enjoyed and good luck on the contest
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