My Emancipation

My Emancipation 

The convoluted misconceptions concocted in your chaotic mind
Will no longer deaden, dim, nor darken  the light that I shine

Constantly minimizing and compromising, the extent of my plight 
I’m stepping out of your dark shadow; I’m stepping into the light

Hiding behind these disguises, I’ve forgotten my reflection
Brushing phony smiles, over the hidden frowns, 
Just to camouflage the rejection

Your bad intent is surpassed only by your insecurities and ignorance  
I will no longer recite from your ridiculous script

I’ve been concealed behind this mask that you painted for far too long
Continually reading your words, and singing your songs

I’ve followed your painful paths and I have walked far enough
You’ve shown me your hand, and now I’m calling your bluff.

Unleash, unchain, and unshackle me
I am reclaiming my life, I demand to be free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/22/2012 10:26:00 AM
This is the 1st poem i am reading from your collection and trust me when i say it makes me wanna read more.....I am still reading...You are good
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:55:00 PM
JUST AMAZING....MIND BLOWING WORK......
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:55:00 PM
JUST AMAZING....MIND BLOWING WORK......
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Date: 9/20/2011 10:58:00 PM
can we be friends if i make you one of my faves. you more that qualify and beside all that all it takes is a push of the button. congrats. john
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:02:00 PM
Beautiful and inspirational
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Date: 8/28/2011 2:41:00 PM
chaquita,This is truely a poem of the heart and soul.I love it. It is really the cry of the caged heart.
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Date: 8/28/2011 2:37:00 AM
Chauita' This is truely A poem with great heart and soul flowing through it.I absolutely love the thought .Definitely a favorite .
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:54:00 PM
"I’m stepping out of your dark shadow; I’m stepping into the light..." that is a tremendous line, well written and I love the "I'm calling your bluff"...go for it - great write, thanks so much
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Date: 8/19/2011 8:19:00 AM
i just loved this one, inspirational and POWERFUL
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Date: 8/18/2011 5:57:00 AM
What a great body of poetic words also ty for your kind comment.
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Date: 8/18/2011 1:29:00 AM
Wow.. u r really good...wow .. a very strong poem.. love your will..p.d.
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:24:00 PM
A very fine piece, I enjoyed the read!
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:00:00 PM
Ouch! *smiles*Poignant dear poet ! You've def. unleashed the wrath of a poet ! Awesome write Chiquita ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:00:00 PM
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Date: 8/16/2011 1:29:00 PM
WHAOO,if dis is personal then i will not like to be in the shoes of the guy in question. dis is just briliant.
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:30:00 AM
beautifully put, one for my favs i think, great poetry. top write
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:14:00 AM
A fine job here and I salutre you. There is a time to break free of the ties that bind too tightly and spread your wings. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/16/2011 10:10:00 AM
You know I love this Chiquitia! Steve
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Date: 8/16/2011 9:10:00 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Chiquita. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 7:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work this morn..We all experience this from time to time in our lives that is wanting to free ...Thanks for stopping by and leaving the uplifting review of my work..Sara
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