My Emancipation

My Emancipation 

The convoluted misconceptions concocted in your chaotic mind
Will no longer deaden, dim, nor darken  the light that I shine

Constantly minimizing and compromising, the extent of my plight 
I’m stepping out of your dark shadow; I’m stepping into the light

Hiding behind these disguises, I’ve forgotten my reflection
Brushing phony smiles, over the hidden frowns, 
Just to camouflage the rejection

Your bad intent is surpassed only by your insecurities and ignorance  
I will no longer recite from your ridiculous script

I’ve been concealed behind this mask that you painted for far too long
Continually reading your words, and singing your songs

I’ve followed your painful paths and I have walked far enough
You’ve shown me your hand, and now I’m calling your bluff.

Unleash, unchain, and unshackle me
I am reclaiming my life, I demand to be free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pietersen Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 10:26 AM
This is the 1st poem i am reading from your collection and trust me when i say it makes me wanna read more.....I am still reading...You are good
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:55 PM
JUST AMAZING....MIND BLOWING WORK......
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:55 PM
JUST AMAZING....MIND BLOWING WORK......
Loving Iii Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 10:58 PM
can we be friends if i make you one of my faves. you more that qualify and beside all that all it takes is a push of the button. congrats. john
Brown Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Beautiful and inspirational
Crocker Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 2:41 PM
chaquita,This is truely a poem of the heart and soul.I love it. It is really the cry of the caged heart.
Crocker Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 2:37 AM
Chauita' This is truely A poem with great heart and soul flowing through it.I absolutely love the thought .Definitely a favorite .
Moriarty Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 3:54 PM
"I’m stepping out of your dark shadow; I’m stepping into the light..." that is a tremendous line, well written and I love the "I'm calling your bluff"...go for it - great write, thanks so much
Effendi Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 8:19 AM
i just loved this one, inspirational and POWERFUL
Barrow Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 5:57 AM
What a great body of poetic words also ty for your kind comment.
A   Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 1:29 AM
Wow.. u r really good...wow .. a very strong poem.. love your will..p.d.
Benson Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 8:24 PM
A very fine piece, I enjoyed the read!
Peranteau Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Ouch! *smiles*Poignant dear poet ! You've def. unleashed the wrath of a poet ! Awesome write Chiquita ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
Peranteau Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Soup mail in a minute
Francis Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 1:29 PM
WHAOO,if dis is personal then i will not like to be in the shoes of the guy in question. dis is just briliant.
Cooke Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 11:30 AM
beautifully put, one for my favs i think, great poetry. top write
Ball Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 11:14 AM
A fine job here and I salutre you. There is a time to break free of the ties that bind too tightly and spread your wings. Good job. God Bless, JB
Henderson Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 10:10 AM
You know I love this Chiquitia! Steve
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 9:10 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Chiquita. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Enjoyed reading your work this morn..We all experience this from time to time in our lives that is wanting to free ...Thanks for stopping by and leaving the uplifting review of my work..Sara
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