My Elementary Struggle

I'm nothing but the particles that construct my vessel
Inevitably co dependent for a pleasant disposition
Its tough to be a neuron without the synapses
Is it really an issue? 
Possibly I should just open my eyes and see the exquisite
staring me in the face
I'm such a fool
Do I have a choice? Is there fate to such experience
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 26, 2013 at 10:39 PM
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