Amber Lomaneck Poet ABC

My Dreams, Or My Reality

How do I know it's real, how can I tell if it's true. When my days turn into nightmares, is it all for real. What is my reality, what are my dream's. when you've had no sleep can your dreams become fear. I try running but they always find me. I try hideing but what am I hideing from? The night time shadow's still haunt me even if I'm awake. Dearing the day I still cant escape. But in the end there's no sleeping when your on the run from your dream's, so tonight will be the last time you'll hear from me.

-Amber lynn-

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Skat A May 25, 2013 at 11:17 AM Amber, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

Kim Van Breda May 16, 2013 at 8:51 AM Good way of analysing the fine line bewteen dreams and reality-- nightmares can seem real, and daytime thoughts dreams. Welcome to P/Soup

Poet Tacito May 16, 2013 at 8:07 AM "There's no sleeping when you're on the run from your dreams"...that's a very intense line. Very nice piece here.