My Dream I Prayed Hoped and Wished For

From the minute i was born,
I prayed, hoped and wished to be daddy's little girl,
As i grew up i started to realise,
That everything i prayed, hoped and wished for weren't going to come true,

I had faith in that person,
I called Dad to change and start realising,
What his little girl wished for,

But it never happened,
Not event o this day,
I'm 14 yrs old,

I have given up on praying, hoping and wishing,
And i know in my heart,
I can't give that man a second chance,
I wanted to be Daddy's little girl for so long,
But it's too late now................

I know deep down this will never happen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/11/2009 8:26:00 AM
I can see why your Grandpa was such an important person in your life, when your Dad failed you as a Father. Praying you will find acceptance by the Heavenly Father who loves us completely.
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Date: 11/8/2009 3:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rhiannon. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:29:00 PM
This is a heartfelt and very sad poem. I hope you find peace in your poetry. Well written. Pam
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:29:00 PM
Rhiannon, be proud to you and look to tomorrow, it will become better and easier and give your mum Mega huggles >> James
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Date: 11/7/2009 12:34:00 AM
That saddens and angers me all the time to ee fathers turn away from teir own flesh and blood. this is a continuous and a universal issue. But let me tell you this sweetie-there will always e someone looking over you and loving you like no other. keep your head up and continue to write beautiful heartfelt poetry.
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