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My Dream Girl

Contest Name: AN ORIGINAL VILLANELLE CONTEST. Sponsor: L MILTON HANKINS. Written on : 02/03/2022 Walking on a lane, and I see you, You are so beautiful, as a fairy, My heart is filled with your smile. You are kind, pure, but who are you, Are you an angel, sent down from heaven, Walking on a lane, and I see you. Storms are raging blue, sun is scorching red, I thought it was the end, but then I saw you, My heart is filled with your smile. I close my eyes, I see you, It's "2" in the morning, I still think of us, Walking on a lane, and I see you. You invaded my heart, you have a victory, This is not a war, This is Love, My heart is filled with your smile. Don't fall in love, you'll get hurt, your father told you, Put your hand in mine, I will protect you, I Love You, Walking on a lane, and I see you, My heart is filled with your smile.

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Date: 5/4/2022 11:07:00 AM
Hello Amit yes I sense that you have deep feelings for this girl. Enjoy your day my friend. I look forward to reading more of your poetry Enjoy your day .
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/4/2022 3:50:00 PM
Also welcome to Poetry soup. I lok forward to reading more of your poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 3/24/2022 1:15:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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