My Dream Girl

Contest Name: AN ORIGINAL VILLANELLE CONTEST.
Sponsor: L MILTON HANKINS.
Written on : 02/03/2022

Walking on a lane, and I see you, 
You are so beautiful, as a fairy,
My heart is filled with your smile.

You are kind, pure, but who are you,
Are you an angel, sent down from heaven,
Walking on a lane, and I see you.

Storms are raging blue, sun is scorching red,
I thought it was the end, but then I saw you,
My heart is filled with your smile.

I close my eyes, I see you,
It's "2" in the morning, I still think of us,
Walking on a lane, and I see you.

You invaded my heart, you have a victory,
This is not a war, This is Love,
My heart is filled with your smile.

Don't fall in love, you'll get hurt, your father told you,
Put your hand in mine, I will protect you, I Love You,
Walking on a lane, and I see you,
My heart is filled with your smile.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Hello Amit yes I sense that you have deep feelings for this girl. Enjoy your day my friend. I look forward to reading more of your poetry Enjoy your day .
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 3:50 PM
Also welcome to Poetry soup. I lok forward to reading more of your poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Agustin Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 1:15 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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