My Dream Date

Let us lose our hearts, within the heart of Nature, my love,
Let Eros and Aphrodite protect us from above;
These green leaves of the white jasmine trees whisper new romance,
Their shy buds, bloomed overnight, stealthily lay their first glance...!

The chain of blue hills and mountains embracing day and night,
Inspire us to walk together in our lasting love flight;
The evening sun hiding betwixt these spreads its golden rays,
Invite us to, midst hide and seek, must not miss our love ways...!

Red apples that tempted Adam and Eve quietly call,
Cherries and strawberries, and pomegranates attention haul;
Pigeons, parrots, and peacocks passionate night secrets share,
Mares and hares and foxes love their partners and, for them, care...!

Down the hills gold black blue blended sea waves and twilight kiss,
Drifting clouds their chats with the costume-changing sky don’t miss;
What could be a better date spot than this dearest sweetheart?
What else could our handheld walks and fervid embraces outsmart...???



09 February 2023 
My Dream Date Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on your win. "My Dream Date" is a very romantic Rhyme  write. Have a blessed day.........................
Ermine Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 11:39 AM
High praise, Alex! ( I must have been tired last night, using your sir name) - your writing is sublime, - Woven in lively meter, lurid matter, touching sentiment.
Alex Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Thank you very much. I visited your page and read a few of your poems. They are, indeed, great. Want to read more from you.
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