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My Dream Cowboy

Clad in boots and jeans with hat and gun The cowboy ready for a long day run A stallion for his ride, rope on his side Diggin' tappin' taming on the vast terrain Tending herds of cattle, sheep and cows Sweat dripping unhidden to his brow Browny tough and skilled Rodeo man Soothened the bull on his crazy dance Crowd cheers - a resonating clang Sunshine sleeps and night sky creeps With guitar and cigar, the Cowboy sits and sings Humming: Yodelay -hee ho! Yodelay - hee ho! (c) Olive ELoisa 6:59 pm April 30, 2014 CONTEST: HOWDY PARDY SPONSOR: Shadow Hamilton 11th place

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2014 1:32:00 PM

Dear Olive, I love your description of the cowboys herding cattle with sweat dripping from their brows. Indeed, this is a more accurate description of the old West than movies would have us believe. Your last line is priceless! Congratulations, Carolyn

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 2:19:00 PM

Thanks much Carolyn..:) I really appreciate your visit..:)

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/8/2014 12:37:00 PM

Congratulations. A pleasure to re-read this piece again.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 5:13:00 AM

Thanks IVo.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/8/2014 12:04:00 PM

Wow Olive ! Splendid ,,, loved ur write and the end lines ,, great ! Merited win congrats !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 5:14:00 AM

Thanks much :) GBU

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/8/2014 9:35:00 AM

This is really good, I can see why Shadow chose to add it to the winners list. Congratulations.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 5:14:00 AM

Thanks much Richard. :) GBU

Lisa Lee

Date: 5/8/2014 9:03:00 AM

Olive, Great write in this one! Congratulations on your win! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 5:16:00 AM

Thanks much Lisa.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2014 9:00:00 AM

Olive' Congratulations, enjoying every poem on Shadow's " Howdy Pard" winning list... XOX~ LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 5:15:00 AM

Thanks much LInda.. :) hugs GBU.. :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/8/2014 8:17:00 AM

I would have liked to place this poem 2nd Olive but you did not use the obligatory title of Cowboys so sadly I had no choice but to place it last congrats on win ty for entering hugs I gave it a 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 9:33:00 AM

Oh!!! Good that you still give me a place Shadow ... Weeeee again did not take note of your obligatory instructions..:) anyhow it is..:) I have fun making this one and that's pleasing already more that you have given me place despite that.. Really thank you..:):) God bless you today and zeal ways..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/8/2014 7:57:00 AM

Congratulation on a fine win on the cowboy theme, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 2:37:00 PM

Thanks Sir ..:)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/8/2014 7:51:00 AM

Yodelay-hee-ho! ...(sounds like Pitong gatang, friend..haha!! ) kidding aside, This one is so great.. very well written poem for a dream cowboy!! .. Congratz a lot!!! :O))) yeeee-hawwww!!! ^_^

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 1:04:00 PM

Thanks much Aiyah :)GBU

Eric Schojan

Date: 5/5/2014 3:02:00 AM

I really love this one, the description and imagery in soo much of your writing is beautiful and intriguing!! I thoroughly enjoy them!!! thanks! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/5/2014 3:44:00 AM

how come it's intriguing? thank you for dropping by .. :) glad you enjoyed it as i did when am making it.. :), olive :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2014 2:34:00 PM

olive, wow.. love your use of lively log about words..heehoo, this is a treat!.. i mentioned you in my blog about meeting someone personally on soup.. guess who?. hope you can comment!.. huggs.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/4/2014 12:44:00 AM

weee thanks much Nette.. :) I appreciate and welcome every visit you made.. :) Pleasure to read your remarks.. :) Yes, i read and commented.. thanks much.. I hope ill see you so soon.. :), olive :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/3/2014 11:16:00 AM

Great poem, you really know your cowboys. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/4/2014 3:15:00 PM

thanks much Lucilla.. :) God bless you and always :)

Shaista Aziz

Date: 5/3/2014 8:12:00 AM

Yodelay hee ho! A great write. Best wishes-shaista aziz:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2014 8:54:00 AM

Thanks much Shaista :) glad to see you back again..:) God bless :)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 5/3/2014 6:30:00 AM

I would have titled it "MY Dream Cowboy" LOL I really enjoy this, Olive, especially the "Yodelay-hee-ho

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2014 8:53:00 AM

Hahahha thank Sir...:) weeeeee Can I take that advice cause honestly I didn't think much of a catchy title maybe your suggestion is good :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2014 2:06:00 PM

Ha ha, this is routen tooten fun! Good luck in the contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2014 8:52:00 AM

Thank you so much Sir.. I'm glad you like it..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/30/2014 6:05:00 PM

LOvely! Very good description; as good as being there. Like Barbara said....original humming...Yodelay -hee ho! Yodelay - hee ho!...:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/23/2014 10:13:00 AM

hahha Paul to be honest i really don;thow Id title this until Jerry gave me a suggestion I followed him.. so that's it.. :D it's okei though.. :

Paul Callus
Date: 5/8/2014 10:07:00 AM

...still thinking ..... did you change the title at one time???

Paul Callus
Date: 5/8/2014 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations on a great moral victory!!:) What a pity none of us noticed the flaw in the title!! :( ....:))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2014 8:50:00 AM

Hey yow dearie Paul :) thanks much for the comment and ammmmn the others too :) lool God bless you today and so always :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/30/2014 12:56:00 PM

Love the Yodelay-hee ho...Ive never seen it written before, made me laugh..Good luck, think you will do well. BG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2014 8:49:00 AM

Thanks Barbara :) God bless you too :)