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My Dream Car

As a child I dreamed of owning a car Saved up each penny in a piggy jar And the day came that I could fulfil my wish Even though at home there was not a single dish -I drove home proud, parking at the gate Went in to greet my parents in haste Hurt as they were for we had to struggle with no space even to snuggle At dawn I went and saw no car But a huge hole where I‘d parked Peeping into the sinking depth I regret that I had even left Lost in an instant was my lifelong dream And my fortune, I could only scream- Therein I fell and hit my head And realised I was not on bed Hurried out with the money I had Handing it over to my dear dad It will feed my siblings for months And pay for moms cure at lengths It dawned on me how wrong I was For almost buying a car, alas! @Nadiya (6 Feb '15) (writing.com)

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Date: 3/7/2015 12:45:00 PM
Somewhere God filled your heart with love. Unlike a car, that's from above. Peace. :)
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Robert... appreciate your visit
Date: 2/26/2015 11:51:00 AM
That was a dream that came crashing down in a dream! But good came out of it, and that's what matters in the end. Enjoyed this write, Nadiya. #7 All the best. // paul
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul... your support is well appreciated... nad
Date: 2/25/2015 6:03:00 PM
That was a beautiful thing, which you did...and a great poem, too.
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:07:00 PM
Thank you for the visit Kiser.. appreciate it.. nad
Date: 2/20/2015 11:00:00 AM
A beautiful lesson in life taught by a poetic loving soul. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:40:00 AM
Thank you dear Emile.. appreciate your comments.. nad
Date: 2/20/2015 10:37:00 AM
Simply beautiful Poesy. As Richard said you have a good heart. Love this. Janet
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Janet.. your visits and comments are well appreciated
Date: 2/20/2015 8:41:00 AM
You have a good heart!
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Richard
Date: 2/20/2015 12:51:00 AM
LOL not only am I waiting, I may write a poem about it!!!!! :) Hugs
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Date: 2/20/2015 2:51:00 AM
Now i hav inspired you lol...
Date: 2/20/2015 12:34:00 AM
If you need a lift, give me a call!!!! :)
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Date: 2/20/2015 12:48:00 AM
Lolx... sure i will... you may expect it any time... thank you Arthur
Date: 2/19/2015 11:49:00 PM
Beautiful, simply beautiful!
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Date: 2/20/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thank you Arthur.. all smiles:).. nad
Date: 2/19/2015 3:48:00 PM
You can still achieve your dream Nadiya - a great thought provoking write about getting our priorities right:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:06:00 PM
Thank you Jan
Date: 2/19/2015 1:21:00 PM
- Food and money to your mother is more important than a car,Nadiya !! - (A secret - I'll get my new car tomorrow 12:00 pm .... hooray !!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2015 2:19:00 PM
- A Suzuki SX4 S-Cross 2015 :))) Thanks for congrats !
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Date: 2/19/2015 1:35:00 PM
Wow Anne-Lise... wonder which would that be... congrats for the new car .. thank you for the visit and for sharing your secret with me ;)... lov n hugs, nad!
Date: 2/19/2015 11:13:00 AM
nads, a refreshing narrative with great insight.. enjoyed your pace, style and word choices... huggs
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Date: 2/19/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Nette.. appreciate your visits and lovely comments.. lov
Date: 2/19/2015 10:29:00 AM
Quite impressive !!!
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Date: 2/19/2015 1:31:00 PM
Ty pranay