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My Dream

My Dream Last night I had a dream. I died and went to heaven. St. Peter met me at the door. He got the book to read my life and as he read, he shook his head and said - I'm sorry I can not let you in. It says here, that while you were on Earth, you smoke drank wine and whiskey too. you did a lot of things that a good woman shouldn't do. Feeling very sad I turned and started to walk away. Then I heard him say - OH; wait, come back here. He told the angel there besides him - take her in and treat her well - she worked for that awful companny, she had her share of HELL... 10/28/2013 Written by Lucilla

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/6/2013 11:04:00 PM

Thank you for the chuckle.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/3/2013 12:03:00 AM

ah you made me smile, all I have to do now is find a job at a terrible Company!!!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2013 1:49:00 AM

I found this funny at the end because all of us are working for awful companies these days. Love this.

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/30/2013 8:06:00 AM

I feel hot in cold here in your dream. The last two lines tell the essence of your dream. Read your philosophical dream in words. Loved always, bl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/30/2013 12:09:00 AM

Made me smile too Lucilla as anyone who has worked for a company who took advantage of them would. Been there myself. Thanks for your sweet comment on my autumn poem. Blessings

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/29/2013 10:28:00 PM

Made me smile with this one. I think a worked for a couple of those companies so I hope I have a place up there. Nicely done. love phyl

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/29/2013 4:40:00 PM

excellent piece a delight in reading

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2013 12:27:00 PM

- Fun to read Lucilla ..... Angels are more compassionate than St. Peter.... - The door will be left open for you ..... when the time comes ! - <3 U !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 10/29/2013 12:00:00 PM

hahaha. I'm guaranteed a place then. I'll meet you there, girlfriend. Licia :-)

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/28/2013 8:19:00 PM

We've all had our share of hell at one company or another Lucy, does this mean we can do what we like now and still gain automatic entrance lol. Very funny write my dear friend, had me laughing my socks off. Take care, Richard

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/28/2013 12:31:00 PM

Excellent!!! That company that anyone would gladly put a name on it! BRAVO! A 7! Very clever! The only thing I disagree with is this: St. Peter will be waiting for you with open arms, when the time comes!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/28/2013 12:56:00 AM

This is an outstanding write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem here this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!