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My Dream

. Her perambulating my dream winking Her eyes fluorescent green in a soft white percale coaxing me with her to undress And then the ringing in mine head Oh my that alarm clock

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 3:10:00 PM

you should have thrown the alarm clock out of the window my friend;),i missed this one of yours and its entertainingly funny,alarm clocks,doorbells,telephones,please-DO NOT DISTURB-;)-CHARMA

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 1:01:00 PM

Time for conscious action ... bro, I love this investigation of the self on the border of personal responsibility ... needed some of those alarm clocks in the past. Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2009 9:43:00 AM

Don't you hate it when the "alarm clock" casts romantic dreams like this from your head? Hope you can continue this dream tonight! Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/26/2009 7:22:00 AM

I was drunk with this at green eyes...yes son, you have written a piece that has left me blue many of early morning....that damn alarm clock LOL....