James Peranteau Poet Free verse

My Dream

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   Her perambulating 
         my dream

           winking

          Her eyes
    fluorescent green
      in a soft white 
           percale
        coaxing me
        with her to
          undress

And then the ringing
      in mine head

          Oh my
   that alarm clock

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Charmaine Chircop May 31, 2009 at 3:10 PM you should have thrown the alarm clock out of the window my friend;),i missed this one of yours and its entertainingly funny,alarm clocks,doorbells,telephones,please-DO NOT DISTURB-;)-CHARMA

L'Nass Shango May 26, 2009 at 1:01 PM Time for conscious action ... bro, I love this investigation of the self on the border of personal responsibility ... needed some of those alarm clocks in the past. Love

Carolyn Devonshire May 26, 2009 at 9:43 AM Don't you hate it when the "alarm clock" casts romantic dreams like this from your head? Hope you can continue this dream tonight! Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins May 26, 2009 at 7:22 AM I was drunk with this at green eyes...yes son, you have written a piece that has left me blue many of early morning....that damn alarm clock LOL....