My Dream

Bob, You are to me All I want to see My heart is in your hands I now know your plans My destined fate Let's us name the date I want to be your bride So you can smile with pride My love is unending For you and our new beginning Can't wait to be your wife So we can start our new life I'm yours alone, forever Let us always stay together

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Sharon Winter

Date: 10/15/2008 1:06:00 PM

No - never got your email with pic! Can you try to send again? Thanks, Shar

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/14/2008 3:07:00 PM

Wow. Is there talk of marriage already? So excited for you! Your love and happiness is contagious! Love, Shar xoxo

Deneen White

Date: 10/14/2008 2:29:00 PM

this is a beautiful write, filled with love and passion, hoep all goes well, take care D-ncye

Michael Torres

Date: 10/14/2008 12:01:00 PM

WOW beautiful poem about marriage. Congratulations on your future husband. Bob your a fortunate man God bless you Janice and Bob may your marriage stay together forever. Very touching it reminded me of my special Janice R.

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/14/2008 8:49:00 AM

Ah, the power of love is indeed beautiful. THis write truly says it all. Very well expressed and I'm so happy for you. Michael