my dogs drink water

My dogs drink enough water
To fill up an oversized elephant
To drowned three camels
To sink a battleship

We cannot keep water in their bowls
And they have ten of them
Six inside
Four outside

I wish my dogs had trunks
They could water my flowers
Rescue neighbors from burning houses
I am surprised they do not slosh when they run

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Date: 11/26/2024 10:28:00 AM
What a fun write you have here. I enjoyed reading it... How about a hose on a slow dip???  Have a fun day writing away..............
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/27/2024 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Paula - I have a fun day drawing and painting these days, writing has taken a backseat.
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