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My Doggie

I have a pet, a smart little dachshund Whenever I go out, he follows me always Watching him wag his tail is fun Mischievous he is, his antics amaze Raven black is his shining skin, With drooping ears hanging down. My sportive little friend is a joy to own. With his funny pranks my days drown. When I take him out, he runs and rolls Truly a bouncing ball of energy His waggish tricks brighten my days Between him and me is a rare synergy With his bark, he scares all rodents away As the stray cat comes in, he is brutally at war With his paws he enjoys prodding the dying rat When he is around, life is never a bore From office, even if I come back late He will be there to greet me, wagging his tail He climbs over, licking me from foot to crown In spontaneity of affection, he does not fail Indeed he is my prized possession In our house, he is allowed to roam free His eyes speak a strange language of love Bringing into our lives so much of glee March.16.2023 ~Placed Second~ Beloved Pet’s Poetry Contest Sponsor- BJ. Legros Kelley

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Date: 3/27/2023 11:36:00 AM
Glee on four paws indeed Valsa! What a wonderful poem on your delightful companion! We are so blessed to experience a depth of love in our dogs - a true earthly example of God's unconditional love! Enjoyed this immensely! Blessings and congratulations sweet friend. So much fun to write about our special companions!
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Date: 3/27/2023 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. Their eyes do speak love. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................
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Date: 3/27/2023 12:22:00 AM
Thank you for entering this poetry contest Valsa, and congratulations on your high placing win! :)
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Date: 3/27/2023 12:31:00 AM
Thank you so much BJ for this great placement for my simple poem.
Date: 3/23/2023 7:12:00 AM
I love dogs, they're so loyal and loving, Valsa:) great poem:)
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Date: 3/21/2023 11:49:00 AM
Such a nice doggie piece Valsa, lovely rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 3/17/2023 6:01:00 AM
They are amazing friends, as is abundantly clear from the poetry that you have written about them. Your heartfelt love and admiration for your cherished animal companion show through in every word. Valsa, I wish you the very best.
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Date: 3/16/2023 8:19:00 AM
Definitely not boring though seeing a dead rat is not so good…lol!
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Date: 3/16/2023 7:22:00 AM
Love it, how much joy and love these pets give, mine keeps taking all my left shoes and hiding them, and digging holes in the yard like a ground hog : ).
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Date: 3/16/2023 5:31:00 AM
They are such dear friends---as your poem portrays throughout. Love exudes through every line for your dear pet. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 3/16/2023 4:06:00 AM
Valsa, I love the line, "His eyes speak a language of love"! That is so surely true! What a lovely tribute this is! Happy Thursday xxoo
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Date: 3/16/2023 3:24:00 AM
I can feel the pride and love shared between you two. They add so much to our lives. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 3/16/2023 2:54:00 AM
Lovely poem. You must be fond of him. Hugs.
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Date: 3/16/2023 1:12:00 AM
A lovely poem about your dog. Well written.
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