Amy Green Poet Tail-rhyme

My Dog Can'T No Longer

My dog can't no longer bark right
Slipped out last night got in a fight
Po' pup now jus' cries

Mebbe he treed a big ole coon
Or howlin' too loud to th' moon
Po' pup now jus' sighs

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Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2014 at 4:38 PM Amy, Congratulations, on your win... Always & Forever...... Linda

Sara Kendrick March 25, 2014 at 10:50 AM Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta March 25, 2014 at 12:32 AM Very lovely poem. Congratulations on a fine win, amy

Joyce Johnson March 24, 2014 at 6:52 PM Congratulations Amy on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2014 at 5:36 PM this is really cute and also how you used a redneck grammar and way of talking!! I really like it.

Robert Johnson March 24, 2014 at 2:14 PM Congrats Amy. Reminds of the old adage, doesn't do any good to close the barn door after the horses got out.

D.W. Rodgers March 24, 2014 at 1:37 PM Congrats on your win and send that coon up here, our dog could use a silencer

Dilys Brown March 7, 2014 at 9:08 AM Hey Amy! Love your poem!! Thanks your kind comments on my poem The Gift. Glad it moved you. Must post more and write more!!! Have workers in house - VERY difficult. Dilys

Tim Ryerson February 27, 2014 at 2:38 AM Hilarious Amy! LOVE the southern slang here too...You must be from somewhere south of The Mason-Dixon line? Good stuff! - Tim

Verlena S. Walker February 24, 2014 at 8:16 AM LOL... Enjoyed... Verlena