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My Dog Can'T No Longer

My dog can't no longer bark right Slipped out last night got in a fight Po' pup now jus' cries Mebbe he treed a big ole coon Or howlin' too loud to th' moon Po' pup now jus' sighs

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2014 4:38:00 PM

Amy, Congratulations, on your win... Always & Forever...... Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2014 10:50:00 AM

Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/25/2014 12:32:00 AM

Very lovely poem. Congratulations on a fine win, amy

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/24/2014 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations Amy on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2014 5:36:00 PM

this is really cute and also how you used a redneck grammar and way of talking!! I really like it.

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/24/2014 2:14:00 PM

Congrats Amy. Reminds of the old adage, doesn't do any good to close the barn door after the horses got out.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 3/24/2014 1:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win and send that coon up here, our dog could use a silencer

Dilys Brown

Date: 3/7/2014 9:08:00 AM

Hey Amy! Love your poem!! Thanks your kind comments on my poem The Gift. Glad it moved you. Must post more and write more!!! Have workers in house - VERY difficult. Dilys

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/27/2014 2:38:00 AM

Hilarious Amy! LOVE the southern slang here too...You must be from somewhere south of The Mason-Dixon line? Good stuff! - Tim

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/24/2014 8:16:00 AM

LOL... Enjoyed... Verlena