My Divine Petition

When I’ll see more people
coming out of brothel than church,
When I’ll see more people
bending down to snort heroin
than in worship in mosque,
When I’ll see more people
coming out of casino than synagogue,
When I’ll see more people
coming out of tavern than temple;

When there will be
no more water fit to drink,
When there will be 
no more air fit to breathe,
When there will be
no more shades of the tree
to rest the weary souls,
When despair, distrust and darkness
overwhelm hope, faith and light;

I’ll beseech the wizards
of the winds and the seas,
And I’ll implore 
the prince and the princess
of the stars and the planets,
And I’ll apprise the lords
of the thunder and lightning
of all the ills of the land
and the evil doings of its dwellers;

And I’ll pray unto them 
To undo
what they have created
And to begin again!


Don't fight it...write it contest by John lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hlabisa Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:15 AM
Congrats
Hlabisa Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:14 AM
Congrats on the number one spot
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on the DON'T FIGHT IT.....WRITE IT!! contest... SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:32 PM
Very wonderful take on theme abdul! Much deserved first place win! Big congrats!
Mandani Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Thanks Upma.
Nayak Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Wow awesome write....calling for a total revival! system and mindset resurrection...... Congrats!!!!.....Anu
Mandani Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:48 AM
Thanks Anulaxmi, appreciate your comments.
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 6:07 PM
I can only agree with what Richard has written - lets hope one day we see a turn around:-( powerful pen Abdul congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Mandani Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Jan. It's never gonna happen. We are not wired that way. We'll destroy ourselves and destroy most of the natural blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Much of what you have written is true. We humans have made poor use of our free will and in the process have given ourselves to bondage. Somehow we have fooled ourselves into thinking it is freedom!
Mandani Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Thanks Richard, I respect your thinking.
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