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My Determination

What was my determination? When you offered me a body, And fresh soul, To behave gently and kindly, With your decent documentation, That you have collected, Through rewinding my mind’s timetable. I thought, you have my supplementary exam, I closed my eyes, To ignore dangers, But noise entered into my body, Through shutterless Ears, I blocked them with my strong fingers, But air conveyed it through smelling, You have authorized me, To deal with issues, Those you have created for me, To enjoy pleasure of sadness. Time caught my finger, And my tiny feet walked a long distance of life, Although you have arranging my food, But I failed to fill my little Tummy, Always my body fell down with tiredness. Time supported me to rise up, And provided fresh ideas to apply for, But I wasted my energy to kill time. And never thought time is only my guide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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