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My Destined Love

Because of how you make me feel I am more like a woman should be My troubles disappear Hold me tightly, forever Never let me go You have given me new hope To love once again My heart is now whole Not broken anymore For once again, I'm happy No more tears will I cry You're all I want And all I desire My emotions are true They will not die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/12/2008 8:05:00 AM
this is a nice write. the message was sweetly said. rare are these emotions in a fast paced world. good job. love, B.
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Date: 10/10/2008 11:32:00 AM
Good write! Good luck! Vince
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Date: 10/9/2008 7:01:00 AM
Janice, I am so happy for you,both of you. Love, for lack of a better phrase, is the band aid that not only stops pain, but cures it as well. This is lovely, so well expressed, so emotional, so flowing and pure. The reader can take full emotion from this write. Michael
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Date: 10/8/2008 4:14:00 PM
Hope it lasts. Sounds like heavenly magic. You are so in love, it is beautiful to read. Love, Shar
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