My Destined Love

Because of how you make me feel
I am more like a woman should be
My troubles disappear
Hold me tightly, forever
Never let me go
You have given me new hope
To love once again

My heart is now whole
Not broken anymore
For once again, I'm happy
No more tears will I cry 
You're all I want 
And all I desire
My emotions are true
They will not die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Reyes Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 8:05 AM
this is a nice write. the message was sweetly said. rare are these emotions in a fast paced world. good job. love, B.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 11:32 AM
Good write! Good luck! Vince
Degenhardt Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 7:01 AM
Janice, I am so happy for you,both of you. Love, for lack of a better phrase, is the band aid that not only stops pain, but cures it as well. This is lovely, so well expressed, so emotional, so flowing and pure. The reader can take full emotion from this write. Michael
Winter Avatar
October 8, 2008 at 4:14 PM
Hope it lasts. Sounds like heavenly magic. You are so in love, it is beautiful to read. Love, Shar
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