My Desolated Land and I

Centuries are done!
But my land and I exist yet,
Under the visage of desolation, 
Camouflaged by an arrogant power;
Bloody soldier, assassin, executioner
Amending, mastering it;
While I stay in abstract hatred,
Robbed off my cream of youth, 
Whose blood has left no stain;
There, on the blood-saturated land,
And set up, halted in mockery,
I watch the mockery of time prevail; 
While my clamors rise and die,
From waning throats void of charm;
Yet, claiming to breach the walls,
These labyrinthine walls rosy-red!
Painted by the blackened blood of innocence,
Leading a stair of my ancestral stair!
Persecuted by that savage beast,
Still, famished, void is their gut!
And to my rueful disaster,
I slumber!
Cushioned by my half-dead people
Walking in the procession of death;
Towards their safe haven.
But I exist yet, 
Brooding upon my mute calamity;
That brings naught but humiliation,
Before my soul; Crestfallen;
Plagued every day and every night,
By dint of a dawdling tempest,
Lingering upon my lamely eye,
Lamenting upon my beleaguered land,
For my heaven has come to a stroke of doom!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/2/2016 3:48:00 AM
This is good. It made me think. And feel for that matter. Great sorrow. Well done.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:37:00 PM
Parray, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:34:00 AM
Hi Parray. Congrats for being featured in the Poetry Soup home page!!! ;-)
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Date: 12/26/2015 3:22:00 AM
wonderful write.. Dark and deep.. See light within my friend and strive for the liberation rather than brooding upon the mute calamity :)) a 7
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Date: 12/26/2015 3:30:00 AM
Thank you dear friend! I'm glad you like it. looking forward to more future interactions. stay well!
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