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My Desolated Land and I

Centuries are done! But my land and I exist yet, Under the visage of desolation, Camouflaged by an arrogant power; Bloody soldier, assassin, executioner Amending, mastering it; While I stay in abstract hatred, Robbed off my cream of youth, Whose blood has left no stain; There, on the blood-saturated land, And set up, halted in mockery, I watch the mockery of time prevail; While my clamors rise and die, From waning throats void of charm; Yet, claiming to breach the walls, These labyrinthine walls rosy-red! Painted by the blackened blood of innocence, Leading a stair of my ancestral stair! Persecuted by that savage beast, Still, famished, void is their gut! And to my rueful disaster, I slumber! Cushioned by my half-dead people Walking in the procession of death; Towards their safe haven. But I exist yet, Brooding upon my mute calamity; That brings naught but humiliation, Before my soul; Crestfallen; Plagued every day and every night, By dint of a dawdling tempest, Lingering upon my lamely eye, Lamenting upon my beleaguered land, For my heaven has come to a stroke of doom!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/2/2016 3:48:00 AM
This is good. It made me think. And feel for that matter. Great sorrow. Well done.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:37:00 PM
Parray, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:34:00 AM
Hi Parray. Congrats for being featured in the Poetry Soup home page!!! ;-)
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Date: 12/26/2015 3:22:00 AM
wonderful write.. Dark and deep.. See light within my friend and strive for the liberation rather than brooding upon the mute calamity :)) a 7
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Parray Shahid
Date: 12/26/2015 3:30:00 AM
Thank you dear friend! I'm glad you like it. looking forward to more future interactions. stay well!

Book: Shattered Sighs