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My Desire

From that fateful first day we crossed paths, I have dreamed of us sharing numerous baths. Fantasized how we would entwine our bodies, As we danced to passion's drums... no studies. Books and lessons we have abandoned, Our love all that matters, though unsanctioned. Our families blood feud precludes our love flowering, The ground stained forever from bloodletting. Forbidden though it may be, it grows defiantly, Stronger with each bloody sunset.. so passionately. Come.. my love my desire..let's take flight, For our child's future we must escape our plight. Love...not hate we must to our child impart, For to us God has gifted his wondrous work of art. A Pontiak Original. ( All Rights Reserved )

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Date: 9/17/2013 5:04:00 AM
nice poem but if you want your work read don't post 10 or more poems a day or people won't read you. 3 is acceptable I know when new that the urge to write is overwhelming you show promise keep writing just spread them out a little more Shadow x smiles
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