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My Denial

Even if I’m wearing black Black’s not my style. And I will deny that I wont accept fact. It’s not a living hell It’s my denial. When I’m feeling mad’s The only time I smile. I’m not left or right I vote for the vile Before I choose denial. I don’t need to be locked up I love my inner exile Where I deny my denial. Even though I’ve got kids I am infertile Can I deepen my denial? When I’m feeling mad’s The only time I smile. I’m not left or right I vote for the vile Before I choose denial. How can you reconcile A veteran juvenile Who lives in denial Writing words of bile? You say I wrote this bit And I will deny it! When I’m feeling mad’s The only time I smile. I’m not left or right I vote for the vile Before I choose denial. 22 July, 2016

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Becca Teagan

Date: 7/30/2017 9:52:00 PM

I like the rhyming in this, it's interesting ,

Steven Henderson

Date: 7/28/2016 11:09:00 AM

I'll take the river Nile. Cause enjoyed these words you compiled. Peace and many blessings to you My friend.

Daniel Davies
Date: 8/1/2016 3:09:00 AM

Thanks SH, hope your boat stays on course friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/23/2016 5:42:00 PM

Its quite a tongue twister of a write Daniel ...there is no denial you write with a unique style:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Davies
Date: 7/23/2016 11:03:00 PM

Hi Jan! I will accept that as a compliment, thank you! xx

David Smith

Date: 7/22/2016 6:35:00 AM

Will check rest of poems later but I see a certain style that shows promise with perspective to challenge and words that tantalise. Reading it I take something away to further ponder and try against my life for size. Give you a 6. I am sure I will find a 7 amongst the rest. David also living under the long white cloud.

Daniel Davies
Date: 7/22/2016 11:18:00 PM

Hey fellow Kiwi, thanks for dropping in and giving this bile a 6. Of course, if anyone asks, I'll deny it!