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My Delicate Crimson Lily

You danced in beauty as you peeked from your dainty bud, your radiance lingered far beyond the day beams end, full of such strength lasting long after life’s natural flood, my crimson lily, to your sweet effloresce I shall always tend. Flourishing and nourishing you bring beauty into my life, I await all year as you thrive in my garden in early July, for you were in my hands as I became Nicholas’s wife, I saw the excitement you held flirting with a white butterfly. For you are my floret that brings magic to my summer days, and at night I see you glow under twilight's bright constellations, in the gentle breeze I stare as your stem graciously sways, during the cheerful daylight you shine with illumination. Bulbs into roots, and roots germinating into blossomed elegance, I lay you softly on her grave because she’ll always live in me, you have remarkable meaning to my heart with strong relevance, for I shall always hold adoration for you, my delicate crimson lily. Each one of us has His or Her own Flower of Attraction - Poetry Contest Date Written: August 5, 2016

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Date: 8/8/2016 8:43:00 AM
This is beautiful. I like it.
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Date: 8/7/2016 3:36:00 PM
Laura, this is beautifully penned and I am loving it 7 ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/7/2016 4:21:00 PM
thank you sweet Broken Wings :)-luloo
Date: 8/7/2016 1:24:00 PM
lou, this is superb with vivid, languid images... lovely flower for your verse!..huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/7/2016 3:32:00 PM
thank you sweet Nette :)-luloo
Date: 8/5/2016 5:54:00 PM
Hello Laura, I fell in love with the title...not sure if everyone for the contest is sharing the same title...I really love how smooth this poem reads...the imagery is awesome!!! A winner in my eyes!!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 10:09:00 PM
aww thank you so much Pace! :)-luloo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:45:00 AM
This is very beautiful and I love lilies LuLoo - the scent they produce is stunning. I grow a variety called 'stargazer' which are in flower in pots on my front drive way :-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 5:16:00 PM
how pretty!! Thanks lady :)-luloo

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