My Debut At Cricket

Sir Leonard Hutton famous for cricket
Idolized him yet we played in the snicket
His bat willow three springs and all
Ours a joke no umpire to call
Yet did dream of 'Lords' having took a wicket.

© Harry J Horsman  2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Congrats on your placement, Harry.
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Back here yet again. This time to say CONGRATULATIONS
Laurie Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 6:21 PM
G'day Harry... my claim to fame shot in cricket was a snick to the wicketkeeper. It looks like us Aussies win is only going to be at Lords - nice limerick Harry - Lindsay
May Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 6:41 PM
Hope you hit a 6 Harry...very nice limerick
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:51 PM
Hi, Harry. thanks for paying me a visit today and I sure look forward to you posting up some brand new poems!!
Johnson Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:14 PM
Would love to sit in the stands and watch with you. Then you could tell me what the hell is going on. :) Thanks for the visit Harry.
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 9:52 PM
saw you at a blog today and just wanted to say hello, my good friend!
A   Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Good one Harry, fun limerick. It's like kicking a basketball... Enjoyed... Linda
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Long time, no words. Happy Easter mate.
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 6:31 AM
Cute one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 1:55 PM
you have a funny bone which makes me giggle... I like how this game can be whip laughter, harry... shine on!.. huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Harry, This is a humorous Limerick. I have tried and tried to come up with one, but I just can't. Thank you for the smiles!
Horne Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 4:33 PM
LOL, not into cricket but loved this!
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 4:00 PM
congrats on the HM, Harry. I think it was for having so many syllables on lines 3 and 4 that it got counted down. It was great fun!
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 2:49 PM
made me smile Harry:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Hi Harry, thanks for commenting on my Tell Me poem. It is now finished.
Sirak Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 7:34 AM
I don't know anything about cricket. Am going to look it up and come back and read this again.
Callus Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Hi Harry! Those who know nothing about cricket will be stumped! Luckily, for us who admire this slow but lovely game, we can enjoy the humour that comes with this write. #7 See you at the Oval:) // paul
Devnath  Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 8:45 AM
With very deep insight you have expressed "yet did.....a wicket". Ours a joke indeed. Sir is Sir in his field of Cricket. We enjoy by idolizing him without any doubt. Lord is Lord, for His dream we are here where He plays Himself being the Umpire of Himself without missing. Excellent philosophy too. Good luck. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 8:21 AM
I have never played but it looks like fun. Good luck in the contest Harry.
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 5:48 AM
A great dream my friend. And while we are talking about the World Cup, what the hell happened in Auckland??? (sorry maybe a little Australasian centric a comment, I'll try again)
Horsman Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 5:58 AM
good on yer mate!
Sathasivam Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 5:22 AM
I played cricket. Nice game. Excellent Harry. Tfs
Meade Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Never played the game but it does sound wicked! Nicely done. 7
Guzzi Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 6:37 PM
LONG/LONG/short/short/LONG-? work on the meter Harry- Andie can help. Light & Love
Horsman Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 4:15 AM
thanks deb will do
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