My Death Just For You

kill me please i wanna die cut 
my wrist and slowly die slice 
my throat just one time put a bullet 
in my eye cut a vien so ill cry
just to see you one last time

i love you forever mom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bono Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Great expression.Long time no hear.Hope all is well with you.Did you ever find that special girl you were looking for?Glad to see you back and can't wait to hear more poems from you.
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:23 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your poetry posted here for many years to come Shain. Love, Carol
Mahrie Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Very strong piecing words ... hmmm wonder life
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