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MY DEAR MOTHER

I have the finest mother
that I could have nother
she shows great concern
and showers joy, I learn

she cleanses all my clothes
and never complains of her toes
I I'm ill ever
she is beside me forever

she treats all my friends
and the good time she spends
she has that utmost patience
that gives us keen existence

I like mother, to the fullest
cause her presence is the tempest
I now feel the world change
without her I can't manage

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 5:54:00 PM
nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 12/10/2015 2:10:00 PM
Remalla, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/7/2015 8:58:00 AM
So glad you have a loving mother! Good write and expression.
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Date: 12/6/2015 6:24:00 PM
Hi Remalia, this is such an excellent first posting and beautiful tribute to your wonderful mother that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 12/2/2015 8:44:00 AM
Heartfelt poem, Remallas,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:27:00 AM
Hello! SKAT A, thanks for the comments. I like experimenting with words. You see me interesting