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My Dear Love

I am close to the nature I am wet in the rain As I'm close to you ..." My dear love " I can share everything with you as I feel your presence You may or may not be there still..." I love you " When small wind strikes to me I feel like you are breathing When I eat some sweet I feel like we are kissing I don't know where are you But I wanna say..." I love you " When you will close to me I may realize that , You are my sweetheart and no one like you... "I love you" - Bhargav Hirwe

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:57:00 PM

Bhargav Hirwe, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Bhargav Hirwe
Date: 4/20/2016 7:19:00 AM

Hello Skat .... Its my pleasure to be here in this garden of poetry. with such a nice poets like you. I am just pursuing my graduation. and fallen in love with these magical words about 4 years ago.

Bhargav Hirwe
Date: 4/20/2016 7:17:00 AM

Anand Parmale

Date: 4/17/2016 11:43:00 AM

Romantic entry to poetrysoup,dear Bhargav.....Nice write....Keep it up

Bhargav Hirwe
Date: 4/17/2016 1:22:00 PM

Dear Anand, Thanks for your complement and warm welcome

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/14/2016 10:13:00 PM

Bhargav, Brilliant entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead.......with love.

Bhargav Hirwe
Date: 4/15/2016 3:20:00 AM

Thanks a lot Manmath ... Thank you for warm welcome.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2016 9:52:00 PM

Bhargav,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Bhargav Hirwe
Date: 4/15/2016 3:22:00 AM

Dear Linda, Thank you very much for your kind words and suggestions. $ Be Happy $ - Bhargav