My Dear

come not to my grave and shed salty tears--recall I used to crave sweets
"Being Misjudged" contest marvin celestial
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 15, 2015 at 6:01 PM
Excellent Senryu. Good luck in the contest! :-)Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 2:39 PM
OH YES. This is one of the best I have seen!!
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July 16, 2015 at 7:27 PM
You like it! Good.
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