My Deal With the Devil

With a deafening thunder
and blazing lightning,
Amidst a swirling clouds
of dark ominous smoke,
He appeared suddenly
smack in front of me--
A most hideous being
who appeared neither
human nor a beast.

With the swift sleight of hand,
Before I could even cry out:
Stop it. Oh God, please stop
He plucked my heart out 
and held it in his hairy filthy hand.

Oh, why he has to take it out?
My only possession, my only wealth,
The only thing that beat against
my frail, long worn-out chest,
Assuring its constant company
in this lonely journey of my life.

But heedless of my pleadings,
He tossed my heart 
into the gutter
with a gut-wrenching laugh!

I asked this foul fiend:
Who art thou?
Why did thou taketh my heart away?

With a guttural voice he spoke thus:
I am the devil! Lord of the Hell,
I am the impetus that steers
the course of affairs in this world;
With me on your side,
You'll get the most out of a strife.
With Adam, the first man, 
I came hither and residing since.
An ardent companion of those
who coveteth glory in life

He bent down, 
And with his flaming eyes 
peered into mine,
Spitting foul breath into my face, he sneered:

But this heart!
Ha, this heart is a hindrance,
A barrier, the core of love and humility,
Where you feel the joys and woes of life.
Nah, there's no need for it.
Not in this world,
Where the mind reigns supreme;
Not in this age,
Where vices prevail unrestrained--
The age of decadence, KALIYUGA!*

He half turned to go,
But then he paused,
Turned back and looked at me.

Never have I seen
such a heavenly sight,
Now transformed into an angel,
He extended gracefully
his milky-white delicate hand 
And whispered softly
on the breath of the breeze:

Give me thy soul...
And I will give thee this world!


~Dark Poetry contest by Nayda Ivette Negron


*(KALI-YUGA- Age of vice, is the last of four stages the world goes through as part of the cycle of yugas (ages) described in the Sanskrit Scriptures - an era of decay in values and the consequent havoc.)
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Spagnola Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Wow! congratulations, your pen took me on a rollercoaster of dark, dynamite ending..:), jill
Mandani Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 5:01 PM
Watch out! I have made a deal with the devil!!! lol. Thanks for your comments.
Kimathi Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Hi Abdul. I've heard about the Kali Yuga. I hope we make a speedy recovery to higher consciousness... Congrats for your #1 placement! ;-)
Mandani Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 5:04 PM
If you have heard of the Kaliyuga, then you must also know that..............there's no recovery! Maybe, yes, to a higher consciousness. But we WILL pay a price. Thanks for your comments.
A  Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Wonderful win. SKAT
Georgieva Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your big win :)
Mandani Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Thanks Victoria.
Canerdy Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win on this chilling poem. Yes, the Devil DOES know human nature! Janice
Mandani Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 10:40 AM
That's for sure Janice, and the devil told me to tell you so! lol
Cheema Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Congrats Abdul ! A sneering devil worse than Milton's!
Mandani Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 10:40 AM
You may be right. I might have Milton's Paradise Lost and Paradise Regained and Dante's The Divine Comedy on the back of my mind. We studied them in our Literature class. Or, maybe, the devil resides in our subconscious?!
Negron Flores Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations in your first placement.
Mandani Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Thanks Nayda, probably you are familiar with my predicament. Maybe you have dealt with the devil yourself? lol. Appreciate very much.
Onclaud Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 3:37 AM
a somber portrait brushed with great images,abdul... well done!..hugggs
Mandani Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 4:39 PM
So, you are an accessory after the fact, an accessory to the deal I made with the devil! Thanks nette.
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