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Poem written for and submitted to "My Song Two" poetry contest, Jerry T. Curtis, sponsor, August 24, 2025

MY DAYS NOW HALCYON - My Song Two Contest

MY DAYS NOW HALCYON ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I embrace the sun's lavender glow, for time has etched my story, one of wisdom, silent knowing an ancient river softly flowing. Refrain: sepia memories have come and gone reflecting upon my days now halcyon these eyes have seen a thousand dawns regretting times when others I did wrong self-forgiveness becomes my swan song wondering if in my waning years I’ll be strong. Refrain sepia memories have come and gone reflecting upon my days now halcyon the temperament’s softened with the years, sometimes remembering trails of a million tears, those invisible ones that cascaded down my face a steady stream sourced at the river of my fears. Refrain sepia memories have come and gone reflecting upon my days now halcyon soul has grown through time’s refrain and my heart now beats a tolerant, gentle rhythm, for it knows of love, of joy, of sorrow's schism. its chambers beating with strength of life’s true wisdom. Refrain sepia memories have come and gone reflecting upon my days now halcyon
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Velasco Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:17 PM
Sara, this is so tender and profound—your refrain lingers like a soft echo of wisdom. A truly moving piece, filled with grace and hard-earned peace.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 4:42 PM
awww, your complimentary and kind comments touched me. I'm grateful you found my poem graceful and moving. wishing you a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:36 PM
Well crafted poem showing one reaching out to mend the past. Beautiful structure with a key repeating couplet. Slso loved the repetition in "a thousand dawns" and "a million tears".
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:43 PM
thank you, Line, for your thorough comments. They mean a great deal to mel...Appreciate your support of my poetry, Sara
DiMino Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 6:14 AM
As it is said, and truthfully so: in some ways we grow old too soon...and wise too late. Good that you have so many happy memories with all the others. A life well spent, with much more yet to come. Blessings my friend. Lovely writing!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:42 PM
I agree...my dad always said, "too soon old, too late smart." Your thoughtful words touched me, Joe. Have a blessed evening, Sara
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