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My Daydream Follows

my daydream follows
naked butterfly watching
cold winter sunset

butterflyhaiku

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Duke Beaufort

February 28, 2015 at 12:20 PM

Well, it has been cold lately in the eastern USA where I am! You have expressed a sense of longing for some warmth. It is a very touching and thoughtful image. Thank-you for it! You have made my day!

Monterey Sirak

February 28, 2015 at 8:56 AM

Only three lines, Rajat, but they made me think. In life we send our dreams racing merrily along in the warm sunshine, only to run into a cold front. We are left much like the butterfly, stripped and stunned, waiting for the thaw. Well done! Very unique.