Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

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My Daydream

The words became jumbled
I attempted to talk about you
Perfume was smeared over the margins
I wanted to honor you in some manner
The sky seemed to sink and flow
I was going to wrap my arms around you
The heart stopped beating and closed
I am sympathetic and dream about you.

Written: March 22, 2023

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Paige Hind March 23, 2023 at 9:47 AM Beautiful. Such vulnerability.

Vijay Pandit March 23, 2023 at 5:05 AM A charming poem my friend--daydreams always fascinate.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 22, 2023 at 3:47 PM Hello Sotto, a wonderful dream that you had . It must have felt real to you. Were you sa\d when you woke up? Did you see her face, or was it clouded.? Enjoy your evening my friend.