My Daydream

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The words became jumbled I attempted to talk about you Perfume was smeared over the margins I wanted to honor you in some manner The sky seemed to sink and flow I was going to wrap my arms around you The heart stopped beating and closed I am sympathetic and dream about you. Written: March 22, 2023

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/23/2023 9:47:00 AM

Beautiful. Such vulnerability.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/23/2023 5:05:00 AM

A charming poem my friend--daydreams always fascinate.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/22/2023 3:47:00 PM

Hello Sotto, a wonderful dream that you had . It must have felt real to you. Were you sa\d when you woke up? Did you see her face, or was it clouded.? Enjoy your evening my friend.