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My Day To You

MY DAY TO YOU
I gave you a new day In midst of rains in May When your need was a shed If sky fell on your head. The day held your lone hand Took you to dry far land Where pink sun came down close Told you hope you don't lose. When full moon passed you by Star dust fell from silk sky You heard song in air blue Knew I was there for you. Sweet spurt of spring breeze blew Dream dust of love on you Joy in you my day grew You found life new I knew. My time saw light of dusk My day you did not ask I gave but did not rue My day made love for you.
February 8, 2018. Each line : 6 one syllable words

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/24/2018 5:24:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/25/2018 12:02:00 AM
Thank you, Line once again.
Date: 2/24/2018 1:55:00 PM
You attacked your challenge with gusts, and triumphed. Well done, Subimal. Regards, Viv
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Date: 2/25/2018 12:02:00 AM
Thank you, Viv for your appreciation.
Date: 2/23/2018 10:22:00 AM
this poem was such a challenge, ,great job sweet Subimal, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 2/24/2018 3:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Laura.
Date: 2/14/2018 5:13:00 PM
Beautiful, Subimal. We can chit-chat about your day any day.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/14/2018 10:58:00 PM
Thank you, Normie. Maybe.
Date: 2/11/2018 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Subimal, enjoyed reading,,, it's not easy to use one syllable words and even harder with a rhyme .. Hugs Eve
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/11/2018 11:35:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. I agree.
Date: 2/10/2018 10:06:00 AM
Lovely. Congrats on your win, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/10/2018 11:57:00 PM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 2/10/2018 9:57:00 AM
Hi Subimal, What a beautiful and sentimental write that's filled with love. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/10/2018 11:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis for your nice comments.
Date: 2/10/2018 9:11:00 AM
Very sweet write Subimal.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/10/2018 11:56:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One.
Date: 2/8/2018 10:30:00 AM
A very special poem Subimal. I enjoyed this :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/8/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi for liking the poem.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/8/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi for liking the poem.

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