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My Day Inside a Beer Bottle

My pace slowed like that of a turtle,
When I spent a day in a beer bottle.
The world kept spinning with high speed
And seemed to be waiting for no one

Thunder balls rolled along the ground
And the skies, clothed in heap of sand
Boys changed to girls
And girls changed to boys
The world had its head down
And its feet towered the skies

My own feet seemed to have kept their distance,
For they gave me no attention.
They had clearly chosen alcohol over me
And had given it their undivided devotion.

I wandered with my shirt around my shoulder,
Exposing the six-packs obtained during my 
fierce battle with hunger .  
I couldn't stop jumping,
For the gutters kept uttering my steps
I lost my way home, although took carefully 
every step.

I saw on the road to intoxication
Signs of blurred vision
Never took it into consideration
It later got my knees weaken

My day was spent inside a beer bottle
Woke up the next day ,
Only to see
I drunk my life out.

   ~stranja
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Hello Stranja Depoet, this sounds like a nightmare. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Hello Stranja Depoet, That is what i thought. enjoy your day my friend.
Depoet Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Lol. It sure is.
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