My Day

What a bright does the day
When her lantern lights and laughs
I ruminate your replica
But I’d say you are who you are
Bright as just the day

What a father does the day
For impregnates the night
For his lantern reflects
For a new day to be birthed
For God’s creature to abide
In the morn
At noon
In the evenin

What a mama does the day
For births days in day
For creature to breed and occupy
In the morn
At noon
In the evenin
I ponder your similitude
I’d say you are the good
For you conceive each day
And born the day

When a night sinks the day
And the day rest for the day
And creature goes to rest
Eyes shut,
What next?
A new day is birthed in land of the lord
For just a day is life in world

O! Creator
On my knee I pose
This is my morning
Innocent of the day
Energy is no doubted
On the ladder of needs
What a sweet is life
When a goal is acquired
I am a bird
Powerless to flutter
High above the ladder
With weary wings
I am a horse
Having marathons to run, not jog
Yet lesson legs

O! Reviver
Comes to my means
Strengthens my wings
Strengthens my legs
Against my noon
For in the noon
Muscle dwindle
For a run on the ladder of goal

Makes my an eagle
Revives my feathers
Want to fly beyond the ladder
Makes me Achillie Tang
Want to have a smooth swim
In this sea if life
Makes me an air, unseen
Want to dance in this lively life
Without a halt
With less effort
Against my evening
For in evening
Weary and crackled bone
As leaves kissed by the sun
And no more run to run
But my labour I shall reap
As famer reaps the crop

And I await the day to sink
And when the day sink
And closed are my eyes
Though darkness
A new day is birthed in a land of white
Where dwellers dress in white
And I shall honoured
With angels ballad



Achillie Tang is a fish.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/24/2016 9:56:00 AM
This is a nice write Afolabi,and spiritual too.
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Date: 6/16/2016 8:17:00 PM
Availability, love the inspirational poem with a great flow a7. Thank you for reading Insecure Attachment. Hugs
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Date: 6/15/2016 10:44:00 PM
I like the way you described each new dawn as a birth and something to be celebrated and enjoyed... Sometimes we forget to stop what we're doing and live for the day... Very well written and expressed, A.M. :)
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Date: 6/14/2016 12:57:00 AM
This is lovely Afolabi. It shows a man of pure spirit that delights in all that God has done for him. Each day is a new beginning and each night refreshes him. Good job. God Bless and thanks for visiting my page and reading for me. JB
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Date: 6/13/2016 7:53:00 PM
A very inspirational, spiritual and beautiful poem, Afolabi. I enjoyed reading it this evening! Sandra
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Date: 6/13/2016 3:01:00 PM
Very nice, Afolabi, and it's great to see you at my poetry!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/13/2016 3:09:00 PM
Lol! Thanks for the support ma.
Date: 6/13/2016 12:30:00 PM
- A lovely poem with heart and soul, Afolabi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/13/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by friend.
Date: 6/13/2016 7:30:00 AM
Very introspective and spiritual writing dear, Afolabi!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/13/2016 3:06:00 PM
Thanks for your pleasant comment.
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/13/2016 3:06:00 PM
Thanks for your pleasant comment.
Date: 6/13/2016 4:48:00 AM
This is lovely Afolabi. A tribute to our world and nature that sings its own song. Blessings, Connie : ) I am off to sleep now, you have a great day!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/13/2016 1:47:00 PM
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