Gabe Shelly Poet Free verse

My Daughter

I said more to her then "than in all our life together"--
She just whimpered and moved her head a little,
Then she was gone.
We didn't say anything...
"A pure change happened"


                           My Daughter
                           "Heaney"
                            6/15/'13

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Poet Destroyer A July 30, 2013 at 9:09 AM they all have their stages when they first say no i got it or stopping the hugs, *sigh*, they grow to fast, which much love, ~always, Linda Gabe Shelly July 30, 2013 at 7:17 PM Thanks. g.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2013 at 1:02 PM ... not easy and raising children - well written, Gabe! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Gabe Shelly June 18, 2013 at 7:38 PM Thanks. gabe