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My Daughter

I said more to her then "than in all our life together"-- She just whimpered and moved her head a little, Then she was gone. We didn't say anything... "A pure change happened" My Daughter "Heaney" 6/15/'13

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2013 9:09:00 AM

they all have their stages when they first say no i got it or stopping the hugs, *sigh*, they grow to fast, which much love, ~always, Linda

Gabe Shelly
Date: 7/30/2013 7:17:00 PM

Thanks. g.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2013 1:02:00 PM

... not easy and raising children - well written, Gabe! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gabe Shelly
Date: 6/18/2013 7:38:00 PM

Thanks. gabe