My Daughter

M... My life I would give for you.
Y...You are the reason I live.

D...Don't ever forget that I love you.
A...Always remember my words.
U...Uncover the mystery of your mind.
G...God loves you, He won't mind.
H... Have faith and you'll succeed.
T...Time will give you what you need.
E...Everything will fall in place.
R...Remember I love you always.

08/30/2012
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 1, 2013 at 3:42 AM
this is lovely Lucilla,, you have a wonderful lucky daughter to have a mother like you...
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November 10, 2012 at 5:27 PM
Lucy, very beautiful.... i give my life to my daughter as well... always~ pd
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October 3, 2012 at 3:04 PM
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September 16, 2012 at 10:11 PM
Oh, I hope your daughter takes a look at this lovely write, Lucilla! You've done justice to this Acrostic form by dedicating it to your daughter. Something she can have close to her and read when she's missing you! Best wishes! Mikki
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September 2, 2012 at 8:44 PM
that's a lioving heartfelt poem for your daughter,Thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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August 31, 2012 at 6:34 AM
Great love that you have for your offspring..We love them no matter what..We give as much as we can for them and try to refrain from giving when we know that need to become independent..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always encouraging..Sara
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