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My Daughter

M... My life I would give for you. Y...You are the reason I live. D...Don't ever forget that I love you. A...Always remember my words. U...Uncover the mystery of your mind. G...God loves you, He won't mind. H... Have faith and you'll succeed. T...Time will give you what you need. E...Everything will fall in place. R...Remember I love you always. 08/30/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Harry Horsman

Date: 2/1/2013 3:42:00 AM

this is lovely Lucilla,, you have a wonderful lucky daughter to have a mother like you...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 5:27:00 PM

Lucy, very beautiful.... i give my life to my daughter as well... always~ pd

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/3/2012 3:04:00 PM

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/16/2012 10:11:00 PM

Oh, I hope your daughter takes a look at this lovely write, Lucilla! You've done justice to this Acrostic form by dedicating it to your daughter. Something she can have close to her and read when she's missing you! Best wishes! Mikki

Erich Goller

Date: 9/2/2012 8:44:00 PM

that's a lioving heartfelt poem for your daughter,Thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2012 6:34:00 AM

Great love that you have for your offspring..We love them no matter what..We give as much as we can for them and try to refrain from giving when we know that need to become independent..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always encouraging..Sara