My Daughter

My daughter 
From the seeds of my heart
My child was born 
So young was she when she bore her own 
Too young they said to know what’s best
So wrong they were 
We laughed at their jest

She has the three girls 
And I just can’t lie
All three of them angels 
The apples of my eye

This morning the youngest 
Boarded a plane 
Going to Hawai’i
All on her own. 

I marvelled at her courage 
Felt nervous for her 
With a last hug and wave 
She walked through that door

Gone not a day 
Yet I miss her so
When she’ll be back 
No one knows

Your such a young woman now
I still call you babe
I love you my darling 
To the tips of your toes 

Be safe and be happy
And know where you are
You’ll have my heart with you 
Wherever you go.
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September 5, 2026 at 8:20 AM
I've really been enjoying your story your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Honestly, I think it would work incredibly well as a manga or webtoon and could help you reach an even bigger audience. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il: [email protected] inst@ akiraa_artly
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