My Daughter

Mercy from God having you as a child

You blossom in our hearts in our souls you thrive

Daring as you are beauty grows in your mind

Admired for who you are ahead of your time

Unique in your deep sight shining soul in our eyes

Great our expectations are huge what is inside

Head over heels in love with what is fine in life

Treasure what you have you are our very pride

Eager your dreams are cheer and bring them to light

Radiant and full of life what you touch turns bright.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ajmal Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Ahh, what can be better than a love of a mother, truly a beautiful poem and it s been a pleasure to read, good luck and have a nice day
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 11:44 AM
A joy to read your lovely feedback Faraz! You have a heart of a poet! Thank you so much for being so generous to visit and comment. Stay safe and blessed always.
Ashley Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Ohh, Besma, such love, pride and joy overflows tenderly from your shining maternal heart in devotion and appreciation for your beloved daughter. That you cherish your lovely daughter in every way gleams brilliantly in your precious poetic bijou. A moving piece that caresses the heart and soul like only a mother's love can. I bask in the beauty of the creative and endearing spirit of your poetry and in your loving glow. Warmest wishes and love always, my dearest friend ~Susan
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 7:04 AM
An honour to know you. You add value and beauty to every human soul.. Stay bright and blessed always.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Everything good flows from a compassionate mother's heart.. No wonder you delight in fine write! You are an exceptional soul who feels and responds to every beat of word in a supreme way! You outshine with words penning with your heart generous care, genuine and warm love.. dear Susan, always with an immense delight I embrace your visits! A soul of abundance, a fount of kindness, generosity and beauty..
Thomas Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 6:03 PM
I have three daughters Besma. Your beautiful work brings tears to my eyes :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 3:35 AM
May your daughters rejoice life in your cocoon of love and beauty.. Thank you FJ Thomas for your precious time to make my day bright with bliss.
One Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Lovely acrostic, I have two daughters and they are very precious to me..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Children are so precious.. They are a blessing from God! May you thrive with and in their company.. Thank you so much.
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