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My Daughter

Mercy from God having you as a child You blossom in our hearts in our souls you thrive Daring as you are beauty grows in your mind Admired for who you are ahead of your time Unique in your deep sight shining soul in our eyes Great our expectations are huge what is inside Head over heels in love with what is fine in life Treasure what you have you are our very pride Eager your dreams are cheer and bring them to light Radiant and full of life what you touch turns bright.

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/25/2018 6:10:00 PM

Ahh, what can be better than a love of a mother, truly a beautiful poem and it s been a pleasure to read, good luck and have a nice day

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/26/2018 11:44:00 AM

A joy to read your lovely feedback Faraz! You have a heart of a poet! Thank you so much for being so generous to visit and comment. Stay safe and blessed always.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/27/2018 11:57:00 AM

Ohh, Besma, such love, pride and joy overflows tenderly from your shining maternal heart in devotion and appreciation for your beloved daughter. That you cherish your lovely daughter in every way gleams brilliantly in your precious poetic bijou. A moving piece that caresses the heart and soul like only a mother's love can. I bask in the beauty of the creative and endearing spirit of your poetry and in your loving glow. Warmest wishes and love always, my dearest friend ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/28/2018 7:04:00 AM

An honour to know you. You add value and beauty to every human soul.. Stay bright and blessed always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/28/2018 7:02:00 AM

Everything good flows from a compassionate mother's heart.. No wonder you delight in fine write! You are an exceptional soul who feels and responds to every beat of word in a supreme way! You outshine with words penning with your heart generous care, genuine and warm love.. dear Susan, always with an immense delight I embrace your visits! A soul of abundance, a fount of kindness, generosity and beauty..

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/10/2018 6:03:00 PM

I have three daughters Besma. Your beautiful work brings tears to my eyes :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/11/2018 3:35:00 AM

May your daughters rejoice life in your cocoon of love and beauty.. Thank you FJ Thomas for your precious time to make my day bright with bliss.

Silent One

Date: 3/17/2018 6:42:00 AM

Lovely acrostic, I have two daughters and they are very precious to me..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/17/2018 12:38:00 PM

Children are so precious.. They are a blessing from God! May you thrive with and in their company.. Thank you so much.