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My Darling

If I am a rose, my darling, then you are the leaves; and we will grow entwined. If I am words, my darling, then you are a tune; and our song will mingle. If I am death, my darling, then you are life; and my tears you will kiss. If I am sorrow, my darling, then you must be joy; and you will show me beauty. If I am sadness, my darling, then you are pleasure; and will hold me close to you. If I am, a rose, my darling, then you are the leaves; and until the end we are one. ______________________ February 11, 2016 Poetry/Verse/My Darling Copyright Protected, ID 16-755-827-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.
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Gupta Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 7:26 AM
Superb writing dear
La France Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Divya, thanks so much for visiting my poem, and for the superb, I appreciate that !!
Sage Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 8:26 AM
this is awesome BW, all words in this poem are great, i really like this, so tender, filled with such passion, superb!
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Sage, thanks for the awesome and the superb and of course the visit ~
Inman Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Gorgeous love poem.
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 12:52 AM
James, thanks for the visit and the gorgeous, I like that word !
Warrior Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Superb verse B.W...if you are the poet we are the listeners...^WW^
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 12:53 AM
WW, thanks for the visit and the superb, oh I like that phrase, lovely~~
Tor Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Touching and loving. You put me in a surreal moment Constance. Beautiful and heartfelt.
La France Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Michael, thanks for the nice comment ~
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 6:52 PM
this is so fantastic, Constance. Which contest is it for. Soupmail.
La France Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:27 PM
Andrea, thanks for the fantastic, this is for the Best Love Poem Contest ~
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