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If I am a rose, my darling, then you are the leaves; and we will grow entwined. If I am words, my darling, then you are a tune; and our song will mingle. If I am death, my darling, then you are life; and my tears you will kiss. If I am sorrow, my darling, then you must be joy; and you will show me beauty. If I am sadness, my darling, then you are pleasure; and will hold me close to you. If I am, a rose, my darling, then you are the leaves; and until the end we are one. ______________________ February 11, 2016 Poetry/Verse/My Darling Copyright Protected, ID 16-755-827-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 4/3/2016 7:26:00 AM
Superb writing dear
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Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2016 4:03:00 PM
Divya, thanks so much for visiting my poem, and for the superb, I appreciate that !!
Date: 2/13/2016 8:26:00 AM
this is awesome BW, all words in this poem are great, i really like this, so tender, filled with such passion, superb!
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Date: 2/13/2016 4:54:00 PM
Sage, thanks for the awesome and the superb and of course the visit ~
Date: 2/12/2016 7:55:00 PM
Gorgeous love poem.
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Date: 2/13/2016 12:52:00 AM
James, thanks for the visit and the gorgeous, I like that word !
Date: 2/12/2016 8:15:00 AM
Superb verse B.W...if you are the poet we are the listeners...^WW^
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Date: 2/13/2016 12:53:00 AM
WW, thanks for the visit and the superb, oh I like that phrase, lovely~~
Date: 2/11/2016 10:20:00 PM
This has to be one of the best love poems I have ever read! A7
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Date: 2/13/2016 12:56:00 AM
Arthur, thanks for the compliment and the 7, so appreciated ~ ~
Date: 2/11/2016 8:28:00 PM
Touching and loving. You put me in a surreal moment Constance. Beautiful and heartfelt.
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:24:00 PM
Michael, thanks for the nice comment ~
Date: 2/11/2016 6:52:00 PM
this is so fantastic, Constance. Which contest is it for. Soupmail.
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:27:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the fantastic, this is for the Best Love Poem Contest ~

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