Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Sijo

My Dance Partners - Visual 2

A gallant moon extends gold fingers to me on the dance floor
as I slip my legs into the chorus line of tall, green grass with ease.
Like a spiraling leaf, I’m free until eyes freeze upon his tracks.

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Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 1:29 AM Dang, Rhonda. That is the danger in not seeing my friends' poems until after my contest is judged. I then am not aware to tell you that you forgot to enter it!!! So sorry. It definitely would have made the winners' list. great personification poem.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 5, 2015 at 7:51 AM the first line is so captivating wow.. :) lovely..! thanks for sharing. :)!

Sandra Haight February 4, 2015 at 8:53 PM Rhonda, such imaginative way to interpret this visual! Very lovely. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

David Fisher February 1, 2015 at 3:41 PM What a wonderful way to describe this image...from the eye of a poet.

Tim Smith January 30, 2015 at 5:39 PM Beautiful imagery Rhonda...hugs Tim

Joseph May January 30, 2015 at 12:33 PM Fantastic write Rhonda......best wishes

Isaiah Zerbst January 30, 2015 at 11:49 AM Wonderful images here. You make the picture come to life!

Carrie Richards January 30, 2015 at 10:47 AM How beautiful this is !! so perfectly balanced with the romance of the picture !! Lovely entry, Rhonda!

Jan Allison January 30, 2015 at 2:46 AM Love your interpretation of the theme - good luck in the contest a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan x

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 30, 2015 at 1:47 AM Ohh Wow Visual #2 Rhonda what a poetic interpretation! God bless your "gold fingers". Love>rajat